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Cool idea.... but the black target is holding the white target hostage.
It may be just me but that could be interpreted as a bit racist... |
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Maybe you should give the black target more of a story by saying something more like, "OK! That's IT!!! Drop your weapon!" Also perhaps on a red shirt? but otherwise nicely done.
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I wish the text bubble was a bit bigger or a more angry bold font. It seems to fancy/light hearted to go with the image. Otherwise, great design!
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