Take Risks: Colour Outside The Lines
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Aug 03 '10
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wow! this coulda double dipped! technocraft style too!
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Another OSC Slogan Swap Winner!
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well done, I love this slogan, and what a great job coloring with the crayon texture!
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YaaH on Aug 03 '10 5
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coool!
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ArTrOcItY on Aug 03 '10 Sweeet!
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love that crayon look!
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evan3 on Aug 03 '10 def 5!
great work! |
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Print
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Sweeet!
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Thanks! Despite the crayony playfulness, it took me a long time to get it to look authentically childlike and to sort of "pop" on the tee.
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Awwww how cute! 5$
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awesome work GT!! $5
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badbasilisk on Aug 05 '10 superb!
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I love this. It is one of my competition favorites. 5$
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very nice!
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ratkiss on Aug 05 '10 nice idea for the contest!
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thats funny :D love it :P 5$
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Yeah, anarchy! woo! don't conform, man!
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Love the execution!
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I like that you use the British spelling of "colour"
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I think it would be more powerful to simply say... "colour outside the lines" You wouldn't need to redo the piece, but it would be a shame to lose the colors inside the words 'take risks'. Perhaps the word "colour" could get those colors. Another idea... You could also have a follow up shirt that says "take risks"... and color outside the lines of the words on the shirt... a riddle for people to figure out. I do love the idea and the artwork. I'd buy it for my daughter. Awesome. I just have the 'less is more' billboard writing rules stuck in my head. Again, really great design!
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I think it would be more powerful to simply say... "colour outside the lines" You wouldn't need to redo the piece, but it would be a shame to lose the colors inside the words 'take risks'. Perhaps the word "colour" could get those colors. Another idea... You could also have a follow up shirt that says "take risks"... and color outside the lines of the words on the shirt... a riddle for people to figure out. I do love the idea and the artwork. I'd buy it for my daughter. Awesome. I just have the 'less is more' billboard writing rules stuck in my head. Again, really great design!
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Okay... I looked at it 3 more times. Don't change it. Sorry... the copywriter in me is working overtime :) The good news is that splitting the phrases could give you a version 2 and 3 or two new shirt ideas.
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stayteoftheart on Aug 07 '10 Really nice idea :)
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Playful feeling at its best!
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Thanks for your feedback, jkganley, though this is a slogan design, so i'd like to keep it intact.
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cute idea!
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nice
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"Take Risks! Colour Outside the Lines"
4 colours on cream/ white
:)