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Monotone Wonders

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Dec 13 '04
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About my design

by turp
Critique appreciated, this is my first submission. Hope you like it.
aloogobhi
aloogobhi on Dec 13 '04
great use if negitive space, the stars are inconsistant but it works for some reason, I would buy it.
Anery
Anery on Dec 13 '04
think u should take away the stars. it aint working. but overall, nice illustration. ^^
marushiodono
marushiodono on Dec 13 '04
I like the stars... I like the entire piece!!! Great work... one of the most creatives!!!
postscript ROT
postscript ROT on Dec 13 '04
i hate her neck
sweetsky
sweetsky on Dec 14 '04
i would buy it in a heartbeat..great job!
johnnymilkshark
johnnymilkshark on Dec 14 '04
Beautiful design. Fivver
ratherlargefire
ratherlargefire on Dec 14 '04
Drop the hearts and I would snatch this up in an instant. Beautiful shirt
g-net
g-net on Dec 14 '04
And by hearts he means stars and I agree.
Kimiko
Kimiko on Dec 14 '04
Yah, the stars need to be more realistic if there at all...but the girl rocks. Very cool.
ed the chic
ed the chic on Dec 14 '04
LOVELY!



great job!
monstress
monstress on Dec 14 '04
This is really great. No complaints at all!
toxicated
toxicated on Dec 14 '04
great hun :] i'd vote for you anyday
antisocial
antisocial on Dec 14 '04
I don't know about the stars all over. I love her though. 5.
quish
quish on Dec 14 '04
i'd buy it in an instant ;)
Marask
Marask on Dec 14 '04
great design. 5!
mcmidas
mcmidas on Dec 14 '04
i was goin to say a lot of things.

then i changed my mind.



5 though.
Woofuls
Woofuls on Dec 14 '04
I like it +5
queenfish
queenfish on Dec 14 '04
Aw, I like the stars. I think it really leads the viewer up the t-shirt without the girl just kinda being lost down there in the bottom. Maybe make some of them the light color blue? That's my only suggestion. :)



Thanks for posting this turp~ This seems like a nice place to try to promote more art. Maybe I'll try my hand at designing a shirt too.



All the luck to you! I'm going to try to figure out how to vote for it now because I think it rocks with turpness. :D
ziLa!!
ziLa!! on Dec 14 '04
very very nice. 5 + buy (if i wasnt so damn unemployed!!)
rachelleigh
rachelleigh on Dec 14 '04
I love it - beautiful design.
funkieaudrey
funkieaudrey on Dec 14 '04
it's beautiful
Ava Adore
Ava Adore on Dec 15 '04
well done vector.

nice.
anewfriend
anewfriend on Dec 15 '04
i like. again, not sure about the stars, otherwise i'd buy.
jessikapowza
jessikapowza on Dec 15 '04
i like this and i like the uneveness of the stars (instead of the stars just being the same shape and then resized all over) but remove the choker from her neck please it is kind of distracting!
Art_is_Hard
Art_is_Hard on Dec 15 '04
Absolutely gorgeous!



5 & buy
brokenhearted
brokenhearted on Dec 15 '04
Amazing!
rex138
rex138 on Dec 15 '04
nice picture its just so big
she______lovesthis
she______lovesthis on Dec 16 '04
Nice, but her nose is just kind of large...
mofavalon
mofavalon on Dec 16 '04
I wouldn't mind the stars going away
unlaern976
unlaern976 on Dec 16 '04
the stars and the illustrative quality should relate to the illusrative quality of the face. The position of the stars are not working with me. The face is SWEEEET. 5
lady_fcuk
lady_fcuk on Dec 16 '04
mabey if you make it just her face? i dunno..i'd buy it anydangway ^_^

5ish
amissanthropy
amissanthropy on Dec 17 '04
similar to my design "star study"
braune_augen
braune_augen on Dec 17 '04
keep the big star and drop all the rest = 5/buy
woofles
woofles on Dec 18 '04
I'd buy it. *votes for the Turp*
choisir
choisir on Dec 18 '04
Beautiful artwork.
aurey
aurey on Dec 18 '04
I REALLY like this. But that one solid star kills me.
__killthelights
__killthelights on Dec 18 '04
The design is grand, but not for a shirt.
gumbii
gumbii on Dec 19 '04
i would love the design without the stars.. otherwise i would buy this in an instant
antimony
antimony on Dec 20 '04
she looks terrified. all i can think is, "OH, GOD! ALIENS!" and it totally ruins this shirt for me.



awesome for a first submission, though. <3
Zoic
Zoic on Dec 22 '04
I guess can't vote anymore, I'm late.

I think the stars look fine! I would buy it, if I were allowed to purchase things off the internet.
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