nightwalker
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Dec 11 '04
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1.60 from 609 votes
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I like it, but I'm not sure the eye color will show up very well. What is that stick thing in the corner?
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what's that thing off to the right side?
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I think it's a sword. It's got potential.
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show her holding the katana
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this is very good - i appreciate the illustration a lot. she's a bit too hunched over- but very nice.
This would look great with either higher-contrast eye color (medium blue - yellow) - or with 50% grey eyes on a darker background - the lines in this design are so strong, it might benefit from less contrast between the shirt color and line color. <3stompy |
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Definitely needs some way to show the sword being held, and lower that color. Otherwise, it is great. Maybe also make the green eyes stand out more, with either brighter green (if that's even possible), or a slight glow.
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What is that black line?
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the green is too pastel. it needs to be a bolder color.
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you don't need the text---it's a really gorgeous illustration on its own.
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(ive got the night on my side) and im wanted..... WANTED. DEAD OR ALIVE.
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This is a great great great drawing. I don't even think you need the text, really.
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I'd suggest doing away with the text and make it more obvious that she's holding a sword. Otherwise, bravo!
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it seems pretty useless to make a screen for such a small amount of green. either use it more or drop it. lose the text too. it doesn't really explain anything and it boxes the illustration in at the bottom.
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i agree that it's not really obvious that she's holding up a sword - maybe you could redraw it so that it shows a hand gripping the sword? other than that, i think it's a great design!
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on a re-sub the text will be gone as well as the color and the blade. i didn't like the blade initially but wasn't quite sure what to do with it.
thanks guys. i really love the drawing myself. |
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i love the eyes-they are the best part
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i've re-submitted this title now. i wasn't satisfied with this one all the way, lord knows why i went ahead and submitted it anyway... but the new one is bigger and still has color but not in the eyes. no blade. that was superfluous. so wait around til the next submission of "nightwalker" appears.
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i dig it, but not that font.
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