When you dream, clocks never display the right time or actual numbers. This is a good way to tell if you are dreaming or not so you can go lucid.

Anyway, I think this design could use a little more but I'm not sure what - any suggestions? Is the concept one I should go somewhere further with or is it pretty lame?

cool idea

i like it...its like whenever ur in a dream everything is mixed up and never the way it should be as with the text. nice. could be better in a different t shirt colour though.

great idea...! i think could qork aswell without the aer yuo dreaming" ... reminds me on the movie "waking alive" :)

interesting

but my clocks always say a correct time

You totally took that from Waking Life.

Nah... not feelin' it...

clocks piss me off. i have this alarm clock with this annoying screeching sound..but this idea is cool. kind of busy tho..

uh...does anyone notice that it says AER you dreaming.....did you mean ARE? Ms. Bradley, you're 4th grade teacher would be thrilled by this tshirt...0 and I'm going to hang myself from the rafters

OMG i did not even realise! and it says 'yuo" instead of you! and "draeming" instead of dreaming! How could I have missed that? =p okok, I guess maybe I should have mispelled it more or not at all if it comes off as a typo rather than relating to the concept.

Thanks for the comments.. yeah I might play with the idea more but change the design a lot. I hate red. No color of shirt seemed to work with that red, bah. I just wanted to get a first submission out there n' get a feel for the process.

About Waking Life, they used the same concept in the film, but the fact that clocks don't work and text appears garbled in dreams was common knowledge amongst lucid dreamers long before the film. Its a reality check - once you realise that your clock is fucked up you can realise you are dreaming, and thusly do cool shit.

I like it. A lot.
Yeah, the typos in every word kind of go with the concept, but the shirt could even do without the text at all.

i'm not feeling the color choices

Concept A+. not sure how to make it work, but I would start by being more subtle.
I enjoy the text on the clock that flows up the shirt and the offset from center.
the aer yuo draeming text bothers me, not from the misspelling but stealing from the imagery the shirt portrays.

i would take away everithing - the clock, the line, the text - and just keep the numbers in the same place. really nice idea!