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Dec 09 '04
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by Ronlewhorn
i dunno... i'm not really getting much of a vibe from this at all... its kinda ok but i cant see the point behind it.... just looks like some rocket powered seagulls!!
virgil_wyld
virgil_wyld on Dec 09 '04
this is really clean and nice-looking. it would be awesome in other color combinations too.
Av
Av on Dec 09 '04
Too simple.
musikgod
musikgod on Dec 09 '04
i like it, but without the birds, or with something else in there place. maybe i just dont like birds on shirts.
Pierce
Pierce on Dec 09 '04
You can't suggest replacing the birds. It's the main focus of the design.



"I like it, just maybe change the colour to pink and black. And replace the birds with... cars. No! Trees. And those lines have to go. Or maybe just make them... circles. Kind of around in a circle. Good design though."



Anyways, it is good. I give it 4.
luithet
luithet on Dec 09 '04
Reminds me too much of Florida. All I think of are seagulls. Are they seagulls or another type?
Tessio
Tessio on Dec 09 '04
I like the design, however maybe making the birds look a little different in terms of the way they're flying would be choice.. not exact copies of each other.
narniafreak
narniafreak on Dec 09 '04
i'd like to see other color combos... nice design
zegazong
zegazong on Dec 09 '04
i think it would look smoother/cleaner if there weren't as many horizontal lines- (take out a few so there's more space in between) and i agree w/ Tessio about the birds- I like it tho, resubmit and i'd wear it for sure

xpostscript
xpostscript on Dec 09 '04
too ...

hollister ish.
IDW
IDW on Dec 09 '04
it is a little hollister, but I like it. gotta say :3
johnvolz
johnvolz on Dec 09 '04
those lines are supoosed to be a bar code at least thats what i think, keep the lines
mangosnot725
mangosnot725 on Dec 09 '04
I just read Jonathan Livingston Seagull by richard Bach. I love this shirt!

Maybe adjust the birds, like they are racing or something, I dunno. Good job!

I give it a 5.
boreas
boreas on Dec 10 '04
fuckin birds...cliche cliche cliche...please dont give this piece of shit a 5 just because it has some bird sillouette on it. That's not design.
Mr Rocks
   Mr Rocks on Dec 10 '04
Too much of an 'easy' design that screams Wallmart, and other such cliche manufacturers. No points from me, but don't give up.
mr fish
mr fish on Dec 10 '04
AHHH! I just got my shirt, but the side was all cut up!!! NOOOO!!! I should have never bought this shirt!!
eternity__x3
eternity__x3 on Dec 10 '04
it...it's so mtv..~ish. lol, i love the comment mr fish gave
derekandes
derekandes on Dec 10 '04
try making the birds different sizes (etc.) to make the design a little more "interesting"
TigerEyes
TigerEyes on Dec 10 '04
I like this-but this design is overdone by mainstream brands. Try something more original.
mandEe-zoid
mandEe-zoid on Dec 10 '04
ha ha rocket powered seagulls
rmorris
rmorris on Dec 11 '04
Just one bird would be nicer - or have them at different points across the shirt. Maybe differing in size too?



Like it a lot, though.
myWalkingheartAttack
myWalkingheartAttack on Dec 11 '04
the lines with the birds is a bit trendy.... :-/ sorry
crazy_clint
crazy_clint on Dec 11 '04
too angular

dth_cb_fr_chrss
dth_cb_fr_chrss on Dec 12 '04
no more birds doing nothing please
navemac
navemac on Dec 12 '04
very nice..bu ti have to agree with some...if "hollister" was on it somewhere it would prolly do well in a......hollister
jennyg
jennyg on Dec 13 '04
^^ truee..



but i like it
sweeds
sweeds on Dec 13 '04
i can fiind this at hollister
iwishicouldplaythebanjo
iwishicouldplaythebanjo on Dec 14 '04
nice-i like it-and the colors. maybe if all the birds were different it would be cooler.
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