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this is nice
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its very nice, but i think the border kind of destroys it..
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cool
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it would be so so so much better without that freakin border....trash it quick
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Great framing. Stupendous, actually.
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Its a good short, but like the others, I think you should drop the boarders, makes me think "National Geographic" with the white and yellow.
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I do like the effect the border gives it but I think it would be better looking without it
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great. but, not to be redundant, lose the border.
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I dig it I just don't like the border, very much feel the National Geographic bit.
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Sweet. The border isn't too much of a hassle to me, what's wrong with National Geographic anyway?
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Wow, I really like this.
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same border problems
I'll give it 5+buy even though I don't like border. Note though, I'd only buy if you lost the border :) |
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lose the border, good illustration
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wait... is that a gun or a fishing pole?
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When I first saw this, I thought he was holding a gun. It seems a little too short to be a fishing pole.
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oh yeah, it kicks ass, by the way.
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I thought the same as I_Think_Im_2D when I looked at this yesterday.. immediately thought it was a rifle, was confused.. now that I look at it again, I see the fishing pole, but I think the thickness at the handle is really going to throw some people off as it has already. Love the design, 4.
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the fishing pole looks a tad like a gun.
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I don't mind the border actually, because there are objects breaking out of it. If you made the border one or two much thinner lines, though, it might be better - it kind of calls too much attention to itself as it is.
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i like the border, esp where the imges extend beyond it. makes it different.
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I actually really like it, and I didn't think I would, just by first glances. But when I really looked at it I was like cool, surrealism.
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I see nothing wrong with the border. Adds a picture-esque 50's quality to it. National Geographic isn't a bad description. Lack of border would make the shirt loose its touch. What, you want it to look like everything else? Keep it.
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I like the border. Nice work.
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i like it!
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a solid 5 without the border
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i like it. but lose the border.
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This would look good on blue.
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i agree the thickness of the fishing rod makes it look like a rifle. what if the guy was standing inside and confined by the box and the birds are flying out of it?
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I like it (minus the border), but it looks like you have 3 different species of birds. Did you really mean to have a ibis/stork looking one?
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If you are going to keep the border, perhaps make it a little thinner and place the design off center on the teeshirt.
Mostly I like it though :) |
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you're special
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get the border out.....need better shadow techniques...overall nice
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the gun does look short. but i like the border alot, especially with the design breaking the blunt fashion of the lines. id keep it. maybe make it taller and not so square-ish.
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