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 That arrow is rather shitty isn't it? Other than that, the placement of the arrow and drip (blood?) is at an illogical angle, and the whole design wreaks of Modest Mouse.
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yah i didn't understand what this was until i read the above comment. it's an good concept, but i just don't like what you've done with it. sorry.
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tgman on Dec 03 '04 good design
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arrows terrible, looks like a banana skin coming off the arrow, overplayed theme... but keep trying!
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the tshirt actually looks better than the design itself. like the idea, though
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it that banana is in fact, blood, make it look like blood.
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what they said
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I like the heart and the arrow, but the... splotch? I guess its supposed to be blood, is, eh. Don't put it in at all. Even if it looked like blood I still woudln't like it. The arrow could be better too. But I like the idea.
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yes. a good shirt design needs to be "gotten" immediatly. better arrow, better blood
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Ironspy on Dec 03 '04 ow... my heart... and apparently my liver too.
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Ya, blood needs to look like blood. I thought the blood or whatever was supposed to represent an opening in the chest cavity for that heart to enter but yeah, yanno. Oh and green?!
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Dont mind the critizing, I like it. 5
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enough with the hearts already.
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"the whole design wreaks of Modest Mouse."
which is good. fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive! |
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it is good - even though it's spelt reeks, as in smells, instead of wreaks, as in a car crash ... or maybe that's what you really meant, Almighty? I like it - but needs to be refined ... and perhaps, being shot in the liver would be cooler, like they had bad aim, or something.
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i like the idea but i hate the phrase "me loves you"
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ohhh i thought cupid harpooned a whale, the bastard.
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i like it, but i thought the blood was a liver or something.
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I saw it as much more abstract then it was apparently meant to be. I saw a funny little creature holding out a heart...haha. I think I prefer my abstarct view then the actual concept.
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i agree with halfdrawngirl.
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i would like it without the stuff at the end of the arrow.
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make the arrow more realistic and move the graphic so the arrow actually points to about the middle of where your heart is.
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AWWW I LOVE IT.
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