Oh yeah, a shirt.. uh.. well you know you can't use that gradient, which is okay cause it would look a lot better as one color anyway. Also, the font you used is really cheesy. Write out the text by hand so it goes with the illustration. If you're really into that typewriter-look, then type it on a real typewriter and scan it in. The illustration ain't bad, though. Play around with shirt colors.
stop dissing emo you don't even know anything about it beyond mr. caraba (who u don't know is the lead singer of dashboard)-neway...i am done defending emo your shirt seems to ruby gloom and too mainstream now-i'm sorry but it works for the pop punk genre