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Breaking Dawn

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Jun 07 '10
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2.60 from 625 votes
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Monkey X

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Breaking dawn... very gently
kooky love
   kooky love on Jun 08 '10
GREAT $5
skater05ralph
skater05ralph on Jun 08 '10
so cheap design.. eeEeewwwww... threadless staff are soo cheap..... $0
Maxixen
Maxixen on Jun 08 '10
nice concept, cute characters, lovely background. Only wish that face can be a lil’ more defined as well as those curve lines can be more...er...curvy.
love it!
zapon
   zapon on Jun 08 '10
nice
EN AJUSTES
EN AJUSTES on Jun 08 '10
Votard sighting!
Nice piece here!
mike bautista
mike bautista on Jun 08 '10
Oo I like this!

Not too fond of the silhouette of the face, but everything else is great.
YaaH
   YaaH on Jun 08 '10
5
Red Rafael
   Red Rafael on Jun 08 '10
great characters!
limonana
limonana on Jun 08 '10
pretty
Zen Studio
Zen Studio on Jun 08 '10
kewl!
pikake
pikake on Jun 08 '10
nice use of space!

have a say on mine pls..
http://www.threadless.com/submission/276983/Keep_away_danger/showmore,designs
morozinka1
morozinka1 on Jun 08 '10
this is so nice!
laurastead
laurastead on Jun 08 '10
i love everything about this but the face in the steam. that could be smoothed out easily enough! 5
davidfromdallas
   davidfromdallas on Jun 08 '10
a bit too reminiscent of buko's skydive print...
jotts
jotts on Jun 08 '10
it's nice, but not super original...
brentendo
brentendo on Jun 08 '10
davidfromdallas on Jun 08 '10
a bit too reminiscent of buko's skydive print...
alexmdc
   alexmdc on Jun 08 '10
cool!
BrettMix
BrettMix on Jun 08 '10
coffee theme is stupid.
jean_warhol
   jean_warhol on Jun 08 '10
nice concept for the theme :) 5
zicr
zicr on Jun 08 '10
This is cool, i' just not into the face in the smoke

5$
Monkey X
   Monkey X on Jun 08 '10
Yeah I'll probably change the ugly 'mug'

and sorry if some are tired/offended of the whole negative space thing (which buko didn't think of btw.) Hundreds of other artists experimented with that... before the internet was invented. It happened to be clouds and the sun cause that fits the theme.

I like to drink my coffee at the break of dawn, early in the morning. Some drink it all day and some drink coffee to pull an allnighter, like I did when I made this design ;)
soloyo
soloyo on Jun 08 '10
I love it!
pianofuzz design studio
pianofuzz design studio on Jun 08 '10
hehehe nice.
jess4002
jess4002 on Jun 08 '10
5$
Letter_Q
Letter_Q on Jun 08 '10
Cool!
SaucyCheese
SaucyCheese on Jun 08 '10
Nix the face thing.
5$
mitchellp
mitchellp on Jun 09 '10
Cool! I like how the coffee is helping start off the new day. I'd also remove the face thing.

5
khalistulistiwa
khalistulistiwa on Jun 09 '10
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
5$$$$!!!!!!
ndstillie
   ndstillie on Jun 09 '10
great!
Jake Friedman
Jake Friedman on Jun 09 '10
skater05ralph on Jun 08 '10
so cheap design.. eeEeewwwww... threadless staff are soo cheap..... $0


I like to think that he voted 0, but then checked off I'd buy it as a tee.

This neat, I think it is similar to buko's design, but still gnarly
catart58
catart58 on Jun 09 '10
Great design!
D-maker
D-maker on Jun 10 '10
Nice style.
oliveroliverbarrett
oliveroliverbarrett on Jun 10 '10
monkey is right, this style doesnt belong to one person. well done.
Moody Strawberry
Moody Strawberry on Jun 10 '10
WAAAYYY too much going on here. There are the realistic nature-themed smoke negative space shirts. And then there are the cutesy food shirts. Usually they aren't cohesive, and then you add on a random profile in there?

It makes for a very odd design.

Either kill the mugs and make it a silhouette bringing on the dawn, or get rid of the face, otherwise it's just very confusing. Maybe you could even make all the elements work by getting rid of the faces on the coffee and making the mugs more realistic?
Monkey X
   Monkey X on Jun 10 '10
Yeah I agree the silhouette of the face is not good
Consider it gone ^^
Jemae
   Jemae on Jun 11 '10
sweet! :)
Nocturne
Nocturne on Jun 11 '10
Excellent work !!!!
JuliaB_Design
JuliaB_Design on Jun 12 '10
Absolutely love this! 5$
tadstick
tadstick on Jun 12 '10
incredible style and layout!
awesome tee!
:D
DaERhT
DaERhT on Jun 13 '10
looks kinda cheap and layout has been used before..
The Paper Crane
   The Paper Crane on Jun 14 '10
$weet!
Plu Shu
Plu Shu on Jun 14 '10
May be Buko hasn't created it of his own, but still, he got printed with :
- stars in the black part of the shirt
- stylized blue sky with clouds and the sun located around the collar

So, I think it's hard to make something with this elements and expect people will get over it ;p

Otherwise, it's a good design, but like MoodyStrwaberry said, there's may be lack of cohesion between the cute coffee cups and the sky part.

But some peeps like it the way it is, so whatever, hey ;)
Monkey X
   Monkey X on Jun 14 '10
It's okay I looked up the design. It has a lot of similarities. Oh well I'll do better next time! :)
quister
   quister on Jun 14 '10
Very cool! Love the tee design!!!
CaffeineIsMyDrug
CaffeineIsMyDrug on Jun 16 '10
I LOVE this.
82 days later
Tunes
Tunes on Sep 07 '10
I LOVE THIS. But scoring is over. Sigh.
49 days later
MADgirl_NL
MADgirl_NL on Oct 27 '10
Love it!
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