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good job on the improvements & GL- it turned out well! :)
Please check out my Wieners! design- it's up for scoring!! :D http://www.threadless.com/submission/276870/Wieners |
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I would have to say that I feel the idea here isn't too strong. That, or I just don't get it.
It's a lil late tho for critiques, so I hope this does well! =) |
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Awww, this is so sad...
How about some texture lines around the outline of the penguin and the balloon because they look kind of flat. |
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Nice illustration style, mate ;)
I have some delicious fresh baked cookies if you need to cheer up your sad little penguin :) |
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Thanks for checking out my design.
I think it's a great concept, but I think there should only be one balloon, perhaps just the red one. The penguin looks like it's floating slightly off the ground, maybe it's just me haha. I'd like to see what it looks like without the black line around every thing too. Other than those minor things I think it's a great concept. |
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(By the way, I tried to incorporate your ideas into the next version of my critique - feel free to look see how/if they helped.)
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