Coffee On My Mind!
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May 27 '10
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2.19 from 726 votes
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what equation on the back? nicely done!
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BOTERIO on May 27 '10 nice!!
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Awesome $5
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nice design :)
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coooooooooooool
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coool
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cool
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GRANDR on May 27 '10 Great idea ... good execution!!!
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Jebs on May 27 '10 sweet design, and perfect execution! Not sure about your composition, layout...anyway, great!
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YaaH on May 27 '10 5
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I would say change the colors just a little bit, make them a little more pleasant 2 look at. :) Definitely a great shirt, though!! xD
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Jemae on May 27 '10 thank you friends! :D
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yeohgh on May 27 '10 bagus yeah!!! LOVE IT!
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mantab!!!
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ben chen on May 27 '10 nice!!!
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cool.
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Jemae on May 27 '10 Thanks friends! :))
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Jemae on May 27 '10 And special thanks to..
Rik Palieri Singer/Songwriter: Original & Traditional Folk Songs..what a great song/lyrics! :) |
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Love it - great design 5$
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Nice!
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HAHA.sg on May 27 '10 so cool bro!:)
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awesome!! i'm loving it! 5$
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Wow, totally dig it! Plus, those colors suit me real good $5
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badbasilisk on May 28 '10 sweet stuff as always!
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quister on May 28 '10 Great concept, awesome illo, my every-morning thought when I awake! $5
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HAHA.sg on May 29 '10 cool illo cool concept!:)5!!!
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huebucket on May 29 '10 cool sir$$$$$$
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herky on May 29 '10 awesome!$5
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Anything Goes on May 30 '10 Love it, nice!
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cool!!
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blue sparrow on May 31 '10 Love the old textbook style of this!!$$
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amazing! 5$
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Jemae on May 31 '10 thnaks again guys! :))
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i think the bottom design is enough for the shirt... like it a lot
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Cool!
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nice work!
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cool!
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4. I'd put the equation on the back, other than that it would be a 5
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Agree with myself gone above... Split the equation but otherwise love the graphic, really beautifully done.
If you have a sec would really appreciate comment/score on my design, tkxxx! http://www.threadless.com/critique/69139/Hand_me_some_peace http://www.threadless.com/critique/69200/Same_Same_but_Different |
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About my design
Coffee On My Mind...
Woke up this morning, sun was slowly dawning,
I just couldn’t get my feet out of bed.
So I stumbled to the kitchen, to improve my sad condition,
sweet coffee beans roasting in my head.
Now my tongue was salivating, while the pot was peculating,
for that black liquid gold just lay ahead.
Then I smelled that sweet aroma and woke up from my coma,
and these are the very words I said
Give me, chocolate raspberry, Tanzanian peaberry,
you know, Ethiopian, blows my mind.
I have the intuition to change my disposition,
you know, I love coffee all the time.
Give me, Blue Peeks, from Jamaica, Guatemala,
mocha java, cafe o-lay is OK every time.
Dark roast or French roast, from the North,
east or south coast, you know I got Coffee on my mind.
Night time is falling and my thoughts keep on calling
for one more old cup to get me through.
This day was a mess, filled with pain and distress,
and I need another hit of that hot brew.
So I jumped into my beat up car, and drove out to a coffee bar,
and now my head is feeling almost new.
With hot coffee in my hand, I’m here listening to the band.
Now I ‘m go’na tell these simple words to you.
Words & Music by Rik Palieri