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Sea Wyvern

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May 21 '10
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This species of wyvern evolved as amphibious creatures capable of swimming or flight. These beautiful creatures are equally dangerous in both environments, armed with sharp teeth, grasping claws, and a venomous sting.
epistaxis2008
epistaxis2008 on May 22 '10
nice detail, i dont totally agree with the placement tho...maybe better as just the upper 2 like a necklace or scrolling design wrapping the neck opening
amphirious
amphirious on May 22 '10
i do like the concept and the design, but it needs more work. the symmetry provided (especially with the excess two wyverns at the bottom) cause the viewer to lose interest in the design quickly, and you dont want that. it could have been much more interesting if you drew the wyverns in different forms perhaps going across the shirt going in the same direction.

if you really like the symmetry, i suggest you follow epistaxis's idea, and try making something similar to a crest/seal (not the animal lol)

im not going to give this a score, but i definitely see a lot of potential with this design. maybe submit another one? i'll be out on the lookout for it. :)
zicr
zicr on May 22 '10
awesome details
Fake Larry
Fake Larry on May 22 '10
I agree guys. It started out as one! Then I put two together and it just looked more interesting.

Someone told me to add another pair, because they said it looked off center wrapping the neck and lots of shirts have a full body design.

Would removing one pair be enough of a design change for resubmission? If it's not picked I will try that. Thanks!
Fake Larry
Fake Larry on May 22 '10
I agree guys. It started out as one! Then I put two together and it just looked more interesting.

Someone told me to add another pair, because they said it looked off center wrapping the neck and lots of shirts have a full body design.

Would removing one pair be enough of a design change for resubmission? If it's not picked I will try that. Thanks!
YaaH
   YaaH on May 22 '10
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EMILY LEE
EMILY LEE on May 22 '10
nice design :)
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