Threadless T-Shirts - learn to fly!

learn to fly! by zHeNNiNo

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1425 days ago

Submitted on:

Nov 12 '04

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553 people

Comments:

24 comments

Final average score:

1.63 out of 5

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arashi on Nov 12 '04

need to refine a bit and keep it smaller
but the concept is good

caucaznpride on Nov 12 '04

reminds me of the ninja mask one... but the design definitely needs to be smaller... maybe 2 rows of three?

lucix on Nov 13 '04

definately too big

zHeNNiNo on Nov 13 '04

maybe you're right :D

cestlavie on Nov 13 '04

i love it. just make it smaller like the others said. and i would change the typo, don´t like the numbers.

Echslectir on Nov 13 '04

yep, make it a lot smaller, idea is cool!
Maybe change the gray parts to a color that matches the shirt color...

Wild Child on Nov 13 '04

smaller and u should aline all the elemens more carfully,
for example the numbers should be the same distance, good concept though

takethetrain on Nov 13 '04

good concept, but..ehhh.

LadyLExx on Nov 13 '04

agree...good concept, but it should be smaller or framed in.

tankmae on Nov 13 '04

nice, but alot smaller, I agree, and no to the pink. The green is nice.

Mighty_Infant on Nov 14 '04

Very cool concept, but entirely too large. Could use humor as well. Perhaps if you have it be a tutorial of how to build a paper airplane, and throw one, and have it accidently hit someone in the eye.

Then I'd laugh every time I wore it. Which would be never.

I'm lying, I'd wear it constantly.

BenJammin on Nov 14 '04

i think mighty infant should design more shirts you are fricken hilarious dude

cikkita on Nov 14 '04

good

Haranator on Nov 14 '04

There's a lot that can be done with this concept, as a few people have already noted. A font change might be a good start.

kaleidescopic on Nov 14 '04

Awesome idea! I think the title makes it - maybe incorporate it into the design somehow? And the red font on the green shirt hurts my eyes. I liked Echslectir's idea of making the grey a matching color. With some changes, though, I would buy this shirt in a heartbeat, it's a great concept.

prettyllama on Nov 15 '04

if the graphic was smaller it'd be fantastic. i'm a big fan of "instruction manual" shirts. :)

zHeNNiNo on Nov 16 '04

i'll submit a revisited version in a few days! stay tuned!

Knock Out Ned on Nov 16 '04

i really love this shirt just make it smaller and 2 rows of 3 would look better...but just awesome..5

Vints on Nov 16 '04

NIce

onefantastic on Nov 16 '04

It's fabulous!!!! I love it!!!!

offbalance on Nov 16 '04

if it was smalle, i'd probably buyr... i dig the concept.

backpocketcomb on Nov 16 '04

Teehee!

redberger on Nov 16 '04

i agree with arashee. but nice concept.

kimberfonic on Nov 18 '04

yes. i'd like it if it was a bit smaller...and maybe different color. the red is bugging me. i guess i just don't like red. grr. but other than that, i'd definetly get it.

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