I don't Like the black. Maybe if the peeps were white outlines (same stroke as the lines on the TVs) and the shirt colour was the fill.

Her left calf and lower thigh have lumps that need to be smoothed out. Do like the fact that you were able to capture her hair, you see a lot of people failing to do that in Illustrator/Freehand.

Interesting.

i actually really like the black. and i like the lack of a groundline. the point gets across in terms of color.

but robsoul is right, the lumps in the legs are pretty apparent.

explanation of "assault?"

i like this, robsoul is right about the calf- the left one looks a little too big.
other than that- i would wear it.

wow i like the girls hair

It is great.

It looks less... squatty?... on my computer. I'll fix the leg and resubmit, if it does okay here.

Thanks.

id like it better if it werent so wide and if the couple was like just a sketchy hobo or something instead

i like this. i would go over both the bodies to simplify the lines. if you are going to do that much detail in the hair, get the bodies perfect too. go one way or the other, right now your doing both. i would wear it if those changes were made.

they are nakey!