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Oct 29 '04
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Robsoul
   Robsoul on Oct 29 '04
I don't Like the black. Maybe if the peeps were white outlines (same stroke as the lines on the TVs) and the shirt colour was the fill.



Her left calf and lower thigh have lumps that need to be smoothed out. Do like the fact that you were able to capture her hair, you see a lot of people failing to do that in Illustrator/Freehand.



Interesting.

change.al
change.al on Oct 29 '04
i actually really like the black. and i like the lack of a groundline. the point gets across in terms of color.



but robsoul is right, the lumps in the legs are pretty apparent.
change.al
change.al on Oct 29 '04
explanation of "assault?"
thistastes
thistastes on Oct 29 '04
i like this, robsoul is right about the calf- the left one looks a little too big.

other than that- i would wear it.
junerocker
junerocker on Oct 30 '04
wow i like the girls hair

broguepanda
broguepanda on Oct 30 '04
It is great.
The Have
The Have on Oct 30 '04
It looks less... squatty?... on my computer. I'll fix the leg and resubmit, if it does okay here.



Thanks.
thelittlesthobo
thelittlesthobo on Oct 30 '04
id like it better if it werent so wide and if the couple was like just a sketchy hobo or something instead

luckyme
luckyme on Oct 31 '04
i like this. i would go over both the bodies to simplify the lines. if you are going to do that much detail in the hair, get the bodies perfect too. go one way or the other, right now your doing both. i would wear it if those changes were made.
awkwordy
awkwordy on Nov 01 '04
they are nakey!
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