this is cute, but i'm left wondering how the guy is suspended in the air like that.

hes jumping like a fish.... i should of put some jump lines..... i am just playing around with some drwings... Critics have fun.... tear it apart.................... hahahahha THREADLESS ROCKS,,, Even the mean ppl.... hahahahaha

OPINION: Reminds me of an illustration I might've seen in "light in the attic" and "where the sidewalk ends." I really like it, if for no other reason than nostalgic association. I'd probably buy this.

yeah, jump lines would be good...yeah, it look slike the same type of drawings as shel silverstein....that's cool....great job!

I like it and I agree about the jump lines.

I also prefer the brightish green color out of the choices.

i don't know if you need jump lines, actually. i think this kicks the way it is. all the colors suggested except pink.

what's the thing holding the fish?

I like this but I think you could make it better.

EXPLAIN IT TO ME SO I CAN FREAKIN SCORE IT

Thanks for the comments everyone.... The thing holding the fish is a Human pole.... Thats why you didn't know what it was... it hooked you before you knew it.....hahahhaha THREADLESS ROCKS..... :) I take the Silverstein reference as a huge compliement... didn't see that myself, but those are some of my fav books from childhood,,,,, I will be rereading those now.... thanks...............