There`s to much going on.

Not to much of a main design.

And if the Danger High Voltage was in there. I wouldn`t even think It`d be part of the contest.

It`s a nice design though.

i think the upward text line (or whatever it is) should be further to the side, it look sout of place in the middle

no more tanks,please!! should say: danger terrorists

too many conflicting ideas here, it's just clip art on a shirt to me

okay, you have sucessfuly combined every threadless cliche. tank, skyline, girl. bad

agree with all of the above

When I designed this I was so psyched 'cause I thought I really achieved a certain deconstructionist vibe,

then I post it and everybody hates it. Well, thems the breaks I guess. I hang my head with shame as I crawl back to the drawing board. Hugs & kisses to all my detractors (wait... hugs aren't too cliche yet are they?)

whoa, whoa wait.. It's good... there's just too much of it.



You just gotta keep with the same mood, but change it up a bit.

too much

love the design, but too busy

i think it rocks

hot design. i give it a 5.

great design but move the tank over so its flush with the VOLTAGE sign

the design looks scattered, but without any context.

So many critics, yet so few creators. Yeah, I saw this shirt, it caught my eye. Thats what clothing is supposed to do, draw attention. You could argue function of it, but then what is the importance of fashion? Take a look at the designer's profile. This is just one of a lot of quality work. And from an experienced graphic design prespective, there is a lot going on. It overlaps, blurs, but the orange in contrast to the rest gives you a center focal point. Makes it have a layer effect. But I guess the majority of people around here don't have a clue about design. Flame me all you want, and this isn't a stand in particular to this artist, but to just make a point. Before you just trash someone's work, lets see you make something first. If you got that taken care of, then have some understanding that styles vary, and being constructive, rather than just cutting it down, is what it should be all about.

Well said dot!!!!

Even if you don't like the design on a shirt(which I know is the point) a true fellow creative would recognize the talent and creativity here.

Have you guy's checked out this man's website?!!!!!