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Great idea, ok execution.
Try putting more detail into the woman, and give some carnival-theme colors. This has a lot of potential. |
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Thanks everyone for the votes and feedback! Much appreciated.
I tried it with colors and half tones but i find the simple black gets the point across best without any distractions. |
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valorandvellum on Mar 21 '10
Fantastic concept! Would love to see the illustration refined a bit more though. I agree-I think this could be a stronger design if you worked on it a bit |
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Highly original idea, but the illustration needs some work. I hope this gets printed, but if not, refine the artwork and resubmit. 4
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awesome idea! i just wish it was illustrated differently. and some color might help, even just a dash of red in her lips/shoes/his tie.
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One color on white or grey.