Re-designed a recent piece that I felt had more potential. Re-inked everything to give the lines weight, re-colored with water color washes, and made the top more neutral as per suggestion. Also removed the clashing halftone sunburst at the top.

Hope you enjoy this new version. I think it feels more fully realized, and my little sister would love to wear this.

Beautiful piece! 5

you made excellent choices with this composition. it's pretty and delicate...i can tell you put alot of time and love into it. wonderful!

So wonderful. $5

I actually really really loved the darker version and I am quite surprised it didn't print.

I do like how you've varied the line weight in this re-make, and agree that the removal of the sunburst was probably for the best. However, I really think that although your new coloring is bright and happy and beautifully done, flattens out the piece quite a lot and makes the design lose its original spooky, moody, dark-Alice-in-Wonderland-surrealness (I know I'm just rambling now) - which I personally felt was what was most interesting aspect of this concept.

Again, I'll still score this a 5 for its general beauty and excellent execution, but it loses the $ for me. Shame on Tless for passing on your previous excellent version. Keep up the good work~

awesome, 5!

I love the warmer colors. Awesome! 5$

5$

great job!

stunning.....I'm in love. the linework, the coloring, perfecttttttttt $5

this is beautiful!

beautiful!

cool

Amazing.

5 buy

GREAT $5

i loved the darker version
this one is okay too though!

5$

Beautiful work dude! $5

thanks everyone

awesome work!!!! 5~~~~

Wow! This is lovely! $5! :D

really great! though provoking....warm....nice!

fantastic!!

As I've said before, an incredible resub. Best of luck, man! $5

real nice! I 5$'d the last one, but I 5$ this one even harder.

love love the yellow is so pretty $5

i like this version as well!!!! awesomeee!!! look fresh and great!!! $5

wow, great!

YEs, this is pretty amazing.

5

A definite improvement on a really wonderful concept and illo, it really bangs home the concept even more with the sweet colors growing underground.

4$

I agree, really improved and beautiful! 4$ from me !

beautiful

thanks again

Great style, line work, and color! Awesome illo and tee design! $5

very nice illo!!

Awesome!

--and that's a 5, folks!

Looks great! $5

this will print

Perfect 5$

amazing job! 5! oh...and I will ask my parents about bumping when I'm ready.

wonderful!

4

This is is great, the original was great but this is an improvement even on that $5

superb!

Liked it before, but these colors just really hit the nail on the head for me.

$5

Ooh this is nice!

backwards land!