Business Suit
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Oct 18 '04
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1.96 from 479 votes
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get rid of the artwork on the breast and it's a winner.
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next time don't paste a jpeg into flash? (use GIF or design in flash)
as a pencil-neck-geek i appreciate the whole pocket-T/pocket protector look (especially when there is no pocket to be had). I'm not so sure that the colour choices are working in the design. the concept is very interesting, only the execution is a little too sketchy in the pocket and too crisp in the guy. |
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Fix the display like foxpaw said.
Other than that, I like it a lot. 4/5 |
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it looks like he peed his pants and his arms look weird.
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the arm holding the breif case should be shaded.
but other then that i love it |
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Should I resubmit with the flash cleaned up? Or leave it be?
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lets go to work =)
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clean the flash up
only really works in the 'natural' colour. but i like this |
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I dig the pocket in a big way. Put that on a shirt by itself. Maybe with the pen leaking??? Dunno see how it looks.
Redraw in flash. Nice one |
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dude, its awesome, id buy 3. not feeling the red too too much tho, and yeh, fix the display. other than that, good times.
also, I too am a recent addition to threadless. lemme know what u think of my submission b4 time runs out, plz! Later Daze |
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tgman on Oct 19 '04 verry cool but i don't put this man. it is not useful has anything
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Langskog on Oct 19 '04 I think it´s funny, but i´d like it better if the man was alot smaller and printed on the sleeve. Just like a bonus little detail.
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liking the pocket idea.....
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i feel like i've seen the pocket idea, with ink running out of it, somewhere here before. anyone?
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I could take a piss- and it would look better than that....
but anyway...... zo what kind of muzic do U like? I likez Avril. She'z hottt. Yellowcard iz also really kewl. BlInK182 is the shit. WoRd, bitch. So- if U wanna- email me sometime.;) :):):):) |
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So- R U going to email me? I'm a gurl- but I can role play- if that's what you're into.
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Messege to 733t gam3r.
1. Where are your submissions? 2.Pop Punk is Emo Shit. Turn off Mtv. and listen to something original. 3.Anyone whos cool knows Miles Davis is the shit. |
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dude its definitely the shit.
i would buy it if i wasnt a poor guy. dude 733t gam3r is talking shit i guess thats just the kind of person he is i too am wondering where ihis shit is as well and his music choice is pathetic word |
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i think that both images are good, but not together. pick one or the other.
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without the man and put some colour for tne pen.
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like the pocket.
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Excellent, interesting design. Bad colors.
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yes, pick one or the other. the shirt feels crowded. nice ideas though.
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i agree w/ doubleknot... the pocket is cool by itself...very SKOLNIK!!! but in a cool way....the guy looks too obvious as a shirt design, would be better as a cd cover for one of those Emo bands, actually kinda looks like a member from an Emo band. hey there's nothin wrong w/ Emo anyway, that's how regular guys find words to say to their girlfriends...back to the shirt, the pocket=4.5, the guy=???
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"falling down" anyone?
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i can't stand the pocket, but good job on the man 4
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pens do need to be colored in. without the guy ? guys pants need better shading.
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looks like Falling Down to me
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2 days later
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what happened to his pants?
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ctt on Oct 23 '04 Next time just leave it vector so you can get a real sense of the graphic. Its no good being able to zoom in on a jpeg/gif.
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get rid of the man
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716 days later
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not a fan of the colors
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