squadron
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2783 days ago
Submitted on:
Oct 12 '04
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26 comments
Average score:
2.07 from 416 votes
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I think it's really cool, maybe if the propellor was white it would look better.
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It's all too big. But it's good. Lose the white "bubble" Lose the red.
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Yeah, i was def. gonna lose the bubbles on the tail, i was jes playing w/ it... the red on the other hand...theyre lasers, homes, they hafta stay...should i maybe make them look different?
also, the size is that big only so you can see the image. It would be much smaller |
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fatclike on Oct 13 '04 rethink the composition, right now its too linier. like the paper airplanes
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just stick the paper planes on in formation.
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no white bubble, shrink a bit
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keep the red, lose the bubble
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i like the whole idea ... pretty cool.... i don't know if it should be on a shirt ....maybe adjust size or placement... i don't know ..you should make it work
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yer something is wrong, i love spitfires, Is that actually a spitfire? I love the paper planes with the lazers, dont like the tee colour.
maybe have the spitfire diving into the bottom left hand corner of the shirt with a single or three paper planes gunning after it? have the forefront paper plane the largest. NEEDS MORE DRAMA! hehe. I love it, make it work. |
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mabey if was only 3 or 4 paper planes and they could be zoomin all around trying to hit the plane
still a wonderfuly cool idea |
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i'm a sucka for shirts like this. i like it
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I think its gonna be cool once ya work it a bit more maybe less paper planes, change the lasers up a bit and maybe all a bit smaller in general. Potential 5
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Hey everyone, thanks for the comments, I really appreciate all of the great feedback. Ive got a second version im prepared to submit soon, so please to anyone who hasnt commented- please do so! I want this tee to be really great (even if threadless doesnt use the final design, ive got plans for it anyway).
Later Daze, n keep up the comments! ~Ej |
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a little smaller and no bubbles and this is the best fighter plane shirt yet
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i think it might look better w/out the puff of smoke behind the plane
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nice warbird!
agree with troninator change the smoke or just take it off i would buy it then |
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this is incredible! fabulous design. don't change a thing...i give it a 5 & i would DEFINITELY buy it. keep up the good work, man.
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REAL SUGGESTION: you know what? i think this is awesome. lose the red, i think it will be more affective (effective?) with out it. otherwise, colors, placement ( alittle downwards, you said, that's good) and size are awesome. rock on. yeah, i said rock on.
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it's great as is
except for the laser right ahead of the wing it kinda dislike that but it's great |
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Awesome everyone...now ive got a question. I know you have no idea wut its supposed to look like, but I want to place a sort of "cloud" directly behind the plane, to represent commotion goin on all around it. Ive reduced it to 3 planes in formation, n quite possibly one laser. Any ideas?
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and by cloud, i mean smoke...or sumthing
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different colors would be cool. i dont know im just picturing it with bright colors and it attracts me more.
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i like this rendering....i think that the "large" layout on the shirt is Avant. Believe in your design Newuzer, and take it for what it is and what it meant at that moment.
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I would like it better if it were on Natural, lost the airplane and the cloud. And maybe lose one paper airplane. I'd also move the laser a little further from paper planesand make them staggered a little more, so they aren't descending in length. However, you have tons of posts and not everyone is going to agree. Read these and make changes with what you agree on. Rock Out.
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I love this...ignore all the other guys...leave it big...i hate centered graphics...and dont get rid of the cloud...just rethink it...or make it bigger to give it more definition in the peice...
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