My homage to the Canadian city, to be a second submission- the last one I was all stuck in the mud and arrogant about criticism! Now I'm used to the technical side of submitting designs, I'm ready to give this another spin.
It looks too busy, really... I get that it's a collage-type piece(and of a large city, no less) but it does come across as looking hopelessly muddy in the center. Either a redisign, or splashes of color to accent certain things would probably help that.
THIS IS BRILLIANT! MASTERPIECE! LOVE YOUR OTEHR DESIGNS TOO. TURE ARTIST,... LOPVING THE FACT THAT IT'S BUSY AS IT MAKE YOU LOOK INTO THE PICTURES MORE AND DISCOVER NEW STUFF. VERY INTRICATE DETAL. SOME PEOPLE MAKE COLLAGE TYPE ART THAT TURNS A MESS, AND THIS CLEARLY SHOWS YOU'VE TAKEN YOUR TIME TO COMPLIACTE THE MIND'S EYE. YOU'RE GIVING PEOPLE SOMETHING TO TRUELY LOOK AT. ART IS TOO EASY THESE DAYS IN MY OPINION. PEOPLE WILL DISAGREE BUT I THINK SOMETHING LIKE THIS TAKES TRUE TALENT !!! good luck
About my design
It's another abstract collage type thang.