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i can see people wearing this shirt , id change the text sizes, and fonts personally, but the black on grey looks cool
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I think you could take a look at some Soviet art (oxymoron?) and propaganda and get some more mileage out of this concept. Nice start, though.
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yeah yeah maybe go some russian style writting with all back to front letters and stuff coz the typ looks about 80% good. Other than that it's sweet. Cool concept
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not bad. the star is played out. maybe switch out the thirt and print colors, make them 'pop' more (more value or chroma contrast)
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I like it, maybe scale the MIR down a little, and the star looks cool, but keeping it black/grey in its colours reflects the (st/n)ation better. I like it though
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i also like the star to add a bit of colour while still keeping it simple