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Oct 02 '04
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The vertical wisps of smoke / heat detract from an otherwise excellent design. Everything else has a graphic solidarity to it, and the wisps almost become like dust on a photograph. I keep wanting to brush them away.
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Yes get rid of the smoke, very strong design otherwise, I love how the burnt matches look.
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Moss on Oct 02 '04 There are also five colours.
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Balty on Oct 02 '04 thank you for the comments, ill try it without the smoke lines
i thought i made the light yellow a tan my mistake |
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you almost don't need the rounded square in the back
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i like it but i wouldn't wear it. good design
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Earth was my favorite
<3 your style |
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that's cool. was this series done in some connection with astrology??
i might buy this, not sure. |
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I think this series would be stronger without the word.
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ooch, i love it.
trash the words, though, i think. |
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By far my favorite in the series, and I like it with the words.
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yeah, remove the white smokey things and also I'm not big on the pink -just a preference I guess. How about changing the red flames to orange and having a red background square shape?
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love the series
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I think the block is too large, more focus on the matches would be nice. do something with the relationship between the lit match and the matchbook. text needs to go, definitely.
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keep the text but the second version of this makes this shirt great
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