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Please Give Me A Clear Sky

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Dec 29 '09
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3.00 from 856 votes
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shuyi

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by shuyi   
5 colors print on dark grey.



Last submission before end of 2009.... Hope you all like it :)



HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!
Mr. Honest
Mr. Honest on Dec 29 '09
i like your colors

dont really get the design though
Ivantobealone
   Ivantobealone on Dec 29 '09
Cute!
scrumdidlly
scrumdidlly on Dec 29 '09
Cute but reminds me of this http://www.threadless.com/product/1274/Hey_Mr_Blue_Sky
ben chen
   ben chen on Dec 29 '09
nice
TyMorty
TyMorty on Dec 29 '09
I don't quite get it, but that doesn't matter. This is artistic and interesting enough that it's just a neat design.



One suggestion: Alter the color of the birds... It looks just a little too much like the Twitter bird, especially with the clouds and everything.



I'd love some constructive criticism on my design. Check it out if you have a second. Thanks!
Lindini
Lindini on Dec 29 '09
I get it. Well at least to me it was quite obvious....
ilovedoodle
   ilovedoodle on Dec 29 '09
Love this!!
Gemma.
Gemma. on Dec 29 '09
Really like it!!! :)
kellybellybell
kellybellybell on Dec 29 '09
I got it. It's like picking out a balloon from the balloon salesman. Anyway, I agree with TyMorty in that you should change the color of the birds. Otherwise it would be a 5 from me.
yeohgh
   yeohgh on Dec 29 '09
this iss just AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! ROCKING!!! shuyi!! $5
lawrence loh
   lawrence loh on Dec 29 '09
nice idea! like to see it get printed on the shirt!
TangYauHoong
   TangYauHoong on Dec 29 '09
very nice!
ndikol
   ndikol on Dec 29 '09
cooool :D
Tikimasters
Tikimasters on Dec 29 '09
How can you not get this? This is a great design, I love it. Awesome job shuyi!
jimmytan
   jimmytan on Dec 30 '09
NICE SHIRT!!!!
RainbowBoo
RainbowBoo on Dec 30 '09
that is so cute and sort of sad (in a good way!)

i REALLY want it!

:D

i hope it gets printed!





http://www.threadless.com/critique/59088/Soaring
Wickedlittletwist
Wickedlittletwist on Dec 30 '09
No on the placement should be higher. Will be cuter on kids and girls that way. Great design though :)
alexmdc
   alexmdc on Dec 30 '09
cooooooooooooool
YaaH
   YaaH on Dec 30 '09
lovely ;D
alexz.
alexz. on Dec 30 '09
amazing drawing!

5$
BubuSam
   BubuSam on Dec 30 '09
nice
sustici
sustici on Dec 30 '09
very cute
homemadeheroes
homemadeheroes on Dec 30 '09
I really like how the design is put on the tee. The illustration is self is nice, but when it's actually on the t-shirt, I REALLY like it.
apocalypseplz
apocalypseplz on Dec 30 '09
adorable :D $5
jess4002
jess4002 on Dec 30 '09
cool!
Gabrielng
   Gabrielng on Dec 30 '09
cool!
Bisparulz
   Bisparulz on Dec 30 '09
love it. 5$
Wickedlittletwist
Wickedlittletwist on Dec 30 '09
I meant that the placement should be higher because it would look cuter on a lot more people. I hate low placement shirts 'cause even if the design is good i won't buy them for anyone I know and i really want to buy this shirt :)
soloyo
soloyo on Dec 30 '09
very simple, very nice, I love it
EN AJUSTES
EN AJUSTES on Dec 30 '09
It really works on the shirt
dschwen
   dschwen on Dec 30 '09
Print!



$5
R Thull
R Thull on Dec 30 '09
super placement!
shuyi
   shuyi on Dec 31 '09
i love comments, thanks :)
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 31 '09
Simply stunning way to use the negative space/color of the shirt into the main object of the submission. Really cool stuff, and I get the hopeful environmental message amidst the degradation.



4$
susanna chong
susanna chong on Dec 31 '09
I get it too!! Please give me a clear sky = No pollution please! Factories in the background tell everything! Nice job and happy new year~~
lunchboxbrain
lunchboxbrain on Dec 31 '09
great work. 4
PreciousIntruder
PreciousIntruder on Dec 31 '09
aw, i love it. ^-^ 5$$
pickupRINGO
pickupRINGO on Dec 31 '09
great colours!!
toshiomagic
toshiomagic on Jan 01 '10
great contrast. i thought it was a twitter reference at first though.



Please Critique
shuyi
   shuyi on Jan 01 '10
thanks! :)
isawa
isawa on Jan 01 '10
Nice : )
Chengui
   Chengui on Jan 01 '10
Nice use of colors!
2 days later
RukmaPratista
RukmaPratista on Jan 04 '10
Sweet concept.

Twitter bird buy a balloon.

LOL

$5
Mitch.G
Mitch.G on Jan 04 '10
very nice and sweet I think it would sell very well!

good luck

If ya have time: Atomic Playdate
fuloprichard
   fuloprichard on Jan 04 '10
5$
vibhin
vibhin on Jan 04 '10
cute design...gud colors..
shuyi
   shuyi on Jan 04 '10
they look like twitter bird??? hahaha, i dont think so :)



thanks for comment!
Pakpandir
   Pakpandir on Jan 04 '10
love it this is so cute!
mlpony22
mlpony22 on Jan 04 '10
awww, cool beans
jeupereira
jeupereira on Jan 05 '10
nice!
SabinaGirl
SabinaGirl on Jan 05 '10
coooooooooooooooooooooool
queenmob
   queenmob on Jan 05 '10
Totally aweseome! $4
RedNihao
RedNihao on Jan 06 '10
Final score : 3.00 out of 5 does it mean it will get printed ??
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