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i love the sketchiness of it... i tried to do something similar a while back.
the text isn't needed, and detracts from the composition as a whole. |
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The text is fine I think. I love the sketchy style, did you do that all by hand in illustrator? It looks too clean to be a scan from ink.
nice work, I'm sure this would do well. |
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it would be cool if you could put the type in a differnt place, like the same spot but on the inside of the shirt
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I like the text, I just think it needs to be moved. Maybe underneath/over/next to the deer somewhere? Great job!
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It'd buy it. The text is the only part that I have a problem with, but not big enough that It would deter me from buying it.
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considering that the text is basically the whole POINT of the design, i give you the thumbs up on keeping it ;] gosh ... some people!
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i actually dig this- a lot. Could be bigger image. You can now put a little gold star next to your name.
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