Fun little look.

ditch the box and just have the flower and font as one ink color - no box

ditto. get rid of the box and maybe choose another color combo.

ditch the whole thing

not that bad. I agree with the others, loose the box, and maybe distress the image a little.

ditch the shirt and use a photoshop template like threadless provides. this looks like it was made with ms paint's polygon tool.

Neat, but the counter forms in the "e"s really hinder it. Other than that, simple, clean, cool. I like it.

nothing special

if you didnt use a barf yellow shirt id love it. HINT HINT HINT

rethink the colours

looks too much like a skater logo. nice idea though.

COLORS HAVE TO GO!

if the shirt were white it would rock

I really like it as it is. Nice work

Again - trite, boring, uninspired. It seems like you're just cranking out as many designs as possible, for purposes of mass production, which doesn't lead me down the path of art, it leads me down the path of Walm-art. This would probably sell thousands in a mass marketing dept. store.

I like the way the image and the text look together, but the box takes away from that and I don't like the colours.

new colors. ixnay the box.

this submission is a PEACE- WEAK.

The design is weak, and just a side-note, let's all make sure we know the difference between LOOSE and LOSE. I'm sorry, so many people have been using it wrong I had to say sumthin'.
But back to the design...a lot of designs are like art..it's easy to do something quickly and without much thought, and a lot of the time it will get quite a bit of attention. Oh well, somebody has to do it.