which side better?
About the design
on December 15, 2009
BENEFIT BEING A UNDEAD:
1. YOU HAVE A CONSTANT SPEED (YOU ALWAYS GOT YOUR ENERGY TO WALK OR RUN)
2. YOU HAVE ONLY ONE PURPOSE IN LIFE (EAT,EAT AND EAT)
3. YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE FRIENDS EVERYWHERE (NO NEED TO CHAT TO BLEND LIKE HUMAN)
BENEFIT BEING A HUMAN:
1. YOU HAVE A STAMINA TO RUN (IF YOU A SMOKER THEN YOU DONT)
2. YOU STILL HAVE BRAIN TO USE IT (THE BIGGEST ENEMY IS YOURSELF)
3. YOU ALWAYS HAVE YOU FOR THIS MOMENT NOW (PRAY A LOT,RUN A LOT))
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chekovskie1980
BENEFIT BEING A UNDEAD:
1. YOU HAVE A CONSTANT SPEED (YOU ALWAYS GOT YOUR ENERGY TO WALK OR RUN)
2. YOU HAVE ONLY ONE PURPOSE IN LIFE (EAT,EAT AND EAT)
3. YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE FRIENDS EVERYWHERE (NO NEED TO CHAT TO BLEND LIKE HUMAN)
BENEFIT BEING A HUMAN:
1. YOU HAVE A STAMINA TO RUN (IF YOU A SMOKER THEN YOU DONT)
2. YOU STILL HAVE BRAIN TO USE IT (THE BIGGEST ENEMY IS YOURSELF)
3. YOU ALWAYS HAVE YOU FOR THIS MOMENT NOW (PRAY A LOT,RUN A LOT))
tomasappleton
coolness
JCMaziu
Haaaaahahahahahaha
Genious!!!
Funny and clever...i want it now!!!
YaaH
cool ;D
alexmdc
the benifits of being a human dont sound too good, but still an awesome design!
Santo76
Awesome design!
Aye16
aha this is funny. i like it
iDanSimpson
"a undead"
ndikol
cool!
Ian-S
Very cool. It makes me think of Zombieland.
Rule 1: Cardio!
sjem
I would recommend having someone proof read your stuff before you sub old chap.
Good tee.
aled
The writing is not great and it took a few minutes to understand what you were trying to achieve with the illustration. The 'speed' lines were unnecessary and would have liked to see more variety in the 'undead'. The idea is good in principle, though! :)
ferfo
a undead
zuukruew
$5, this is great!
fablehill
I'd have it without the benefits text, the image itself is enough!
Mark Hartman
@ fatheed
I agree with you on the text to a certain degree, but the speed lines balance the composition and since when is there much variety in zombies?
zomboy99
wtf?
drwhofreak
SO SO COOL.
Andreas Mohacsy
cute
iamzacky
the idea is great but would be even better if you revise the writing and lessen the repetition on the zombies.
ErinLeighTurner
Love the pic, not so keen on the text. You could make it more succinct or get rid of it all together. The design is strong enough on its own
Spieliewielie
am I the only one who sees the writing mistakes?
It should be Benefits of being an undead.
you´re having more then one benefit so...
In the other one about the humans it´s the same thing, add the s.
I can´t read the lines about the benefits so I can´t check them.
I like the design, but it´s not something I´d wear. I don´t wear the ´statistical´ kinda shirts. A 3 from me.
tadstick
pretty funny!
PassengerPress
Threadless, please pay Spieliewielie for the great work she's doing for you!
Kensiface
There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. I love the art, but the wording needs a lot of help, and could be made more concise and witty.
cnash912
Love this, but the grammar and spelling mistakes drive me insane :(
Also, instead of a graphic, maybe you should try doing a Pro-Con list for being undead or something? Might be ten times cooler...
C Kid
I like this!
YNEZ
the art is really cool and the text looks good but you need to have a native english speaker edit it for you
JCMaziu
Well, I think that if the design is chosen to be printed they can always correct the errors in the text.
I think the idea is fresh and you can always look beyond the mistakes easily rectifiable.
I still want one.
Isela
I like the design but you should get rid of the text
blue sparrow
Love all the little details
Bitterisataste
I would absolutely buy this shirt, but I feel like the poor English would have people asking me if I bought the t-shirt in Mexico. If it was just the image it would be perfect.
mbrundis
awesome minus text.. or maybe just some editing?
John Will Balsley
Ha ha!
pickupRINGO
awesome design!! great 5$$
Letaz
amazingggg!
Monkey X
ahhaha great stuff reminds me of zombieland
soloyo
congrats!!!!!
jess4002
congrats!
8randon
this getting printed = me having the happies
B 7
Congratulations!!
tadstick
big congrats!
Anficha Ink
Ice cold!
NiNTH WHEEL
Congrats!!
juliejeremiah
I kinda liked this better with the poor grammar, it gave the shirt a bit more charm, I think.
kooky love
CONGREAT!
peppelorum
Shouldn't it be "Human vs undead" since the human is on the left side, or?
chekovskie1980
thx all for every comments for me
wait for my works in nearly future
Stikki Side Up
seriously??
NeoSquirrel
Shocking that YaaH actually just said "cool" and not "4" like always.
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