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chekovskie1980

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by chekovskie1980   
BENEFIT BEING A UNDEAD:

1. YOU HAVE A CONSTANT SPEED (YOU ALWAYS GOT YOUR ENERGY TO WALK OR RUN)

2. YOU HAVE ONLY ONE PURPOSE IN LIFE (EAT,EAT AND EAT)

3. YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE FRIENDS EVERYWHERE (NO NEED TO CHAT TO BLEND LIKE HUMAN)





BENEFIT BEING A HUMAN:

1. YOU HAVE A STAMINA TO RUN (IF YOU A SMOKER THEN YOU DONT)

2. YOU STILL HAVE BRAIN TO USE IT (THE BIGGEST ENEMY IS YOURSELF)

3. YOU ALWAYS HAVE YOU FOR THIS MOMENT NOW (PRAY A LOT,RUN A LOT))
YaaH
   YaaH on Dec 16 '09
cool ;D
alexmdc
   alexmdc on Dec 16 '09
the benifits of being a human dont sound too good, but still an awesome design!
Santo76
   Santo76 on Dec 16 '09
Awesome design!
iDanSimpson
iDanSimpson on Dec 16 '09
"a undead"
ndikol
   ndikol on Dec 17 '09
cool!
Ian-S
   Ian-S on Dec 17 '09
Very cool. It makes me think of Zombieland.



Rule 1: Cardio!
sjem
sjem on Dec 17 '09
I would recommend having someone proof read your stuff before you sub old chap.



Good tee.
fatheed
   fatheed on Dec 17 '09
The writing is not great and it took a few minutes to understand what you were trying to achieve with the illustration. The 'speed' lines were unnecessary and would have liked to see more variety in the 'undead'. The idea is good in principle, though! :)
ferfo
ferfo on Dec 17 '09
a undead
zuukruew
zuukruew on Dec 17 '09
$5, this is great!
fablehill
fablehill on Dec 17 '09
I'd have it without the benefits text, the image itself is enough!
Mark Hartman
Mark Hartman on Dec 18 '09
@ fatheed



I agree with you on the text to a certain degree, but the speed lines balance the composition and since when is there much variety in zombies?
zomboy99
zomboy99 on Dec 18 '09
wtf?
drwhofreak
   drwhofreak on Dec 18 '09
SO SO COOL.
Andreas Mohacsy
   Andreas Mohacsy on Dec 18 '09
cute
iamzacky
iamzacky on Dec 19 '09
the idea is great but would be even better if you revise the writing and lessen the repetition on the zombies.
ErinLeighTurner
ErinLeighTurner on Dec 19 '09
Love the pic, not so keen on the text. You could make it more succinct or get rid of it all together. The design is strong enough on its own
Spieliewielie
Spieliewielie on Dec 19 '09
am I the only one who sees the writing mistakes?



It should be Benefits of being an undead.

youīre having more then one benefit so...



In the other one about the humans itīs the same thing, add the s.



I canīt read the lines about the benefits so I canīt check them.





I like the design, but itīs not something Iīd wear. I donīt wear the īstatisticalī kinda shirts. A 3 from me.
tadstick
tadstick on Dec 20 '09
pretty funny!
PassengerPress
PassengerPress on Dec 20 '09
Threadless, please pay Spieliewielie for the great work she's doing for you!
Kensiface
Kensiface on Dec 20 '09
There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. I love the art, but the wording needs a lot of help, and could be made more concise and witty.
cnash912
cnash912 on Dec 20 '09
Love this, but the grammar and spelling mistakes drive me insane :(

Also, instead of a graphic, maybe you should try doing a Pro-Con list for being undead or something? Might be ten times cooler...
C Kid
   C Kid on Dec 20 '09
I like this!
YNEZ
YNEZ on Dec 21 '09
the art is really cool and the text looks good but you need to have a native english speaker edit it for you
blue sparrow
   blue sparrow on Dec 21 '09
Love all the little details
Bitterisataste
Bitterisataste on Dec 21 '09
I would absolutely buy this shirt, but I feel like the poor English would have people asking me if I bought the t-shirt in Mexico. If it was just the image it would be perfect.
mbrundis
mbrundis on Dec 22 '09
awesome minus text.. or maybe just some editing?
John Will Balsley
John Will Balsley on Dec 22 '09
Ha ha!
pickupRINGO
pickupRINGO on Dec 22 '09
awesome design!! great 5$$
Letaz
Letaz on Dec 23 '09
amazingggg!
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Monkey X
   Monkey X on Feb 02 '10
ahhaha great stuff reminds me of zombieland
52 days later
soloyo
soloyo on Mar 26 '10
congrats!!!!!
jess4002
jess4002 on Mar 26 '10
congrats!
2 days later
B 7
   B 7 on Mar 29 '10
Congratulations!!
tadstick
tadstick on Mar 29 '10
big congrats!
Anficha Ink
Anficha Ink on Mar 29 '10
Ice cold!
NiNTH WHEEL
   NiNTH WHEEL on Mar 29 '10
Congrats!!
juliejeremiah
juliejeremiah on Mar 29 '10
I kinda liked this better with the poor grammar, it gave the shirt a bit more charm, I think.
kooky love
   kooky love on Mar 29 '10
CONGREAT!
peppelorum
peppelorum on Mar 30 '10
Shouldn't it be "Human vs undead" since the human is on the left side, or?
chekovskie1980
   chekovskie1980 on Mar 30 '10
thx all for every comments for me



wait for my works in nearly future
Stikki Side Up
Stikki Side Up on Mar 30 '10
seriously??
148 days later
NeoSquirrel
NeoSquirrel on Aug 25 '10
Shocking that YaaH actually just said "cool" and not "4" like always.
14 days later
Ro.Bro
Ro.Bro on Sep 08 '10
very cool
352 days later
Luars
Luars on Aug 27 '11
congrats..... really funny
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