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@ fatheed
I agree with you on the text to a certain degree, but the speed lines balance the composition and since when is there much variety in zombies? |
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the idea is great but would be even better if you revise the writing and lessen the repetition on the zombies.
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Love the pic, not so keen on the text. You could make it more succinct or get rid of it all together. The design is strong enough on its own
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There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. I love the art, but the wording needs a lot of help, and could be made more concise and witty.
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Love this, but the grammar and spelling mistakes drive me insane :(
Also, instead of a graphic, maybe you should try doing a Pro-Con list for being undead or something? Might be ten times cooler... |
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the art is really cool and the text looks good but you need to have a native english speaker edit it for you
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I would absolutely buy this shirt, but I feel like the poor English would have people asking me if I bought the t-shirt in Mexico. If it was just the image it would be perfect.
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About my design
1. YOU HAVE A CONSTANT SPEED (YOU ALWAYS GOT YOUR ENERGY TO WALK OR RUN)
2. YOU HAVE ONLY ONE PURPOSE IN LIFE (EAT,EAT AND EAT)
3. YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE FRIENDS EVERYWHERE (NO NEED TO CHAT TO BLEND LIKE HUMAN)
BENEFIT BEING A HUMAN:
1. YOU HAVE A STAMINA TO RUN (IF YOU A SMOKER THEN YOU DONT)
2. YOU STILL HAVE BRAIN TO USE IT (THE BIGGEST ENEMY IS YOURSELF)
3. YOU ALWAYS HAVE YOU FOR THIS MOMENT NOW (PRAY A LOT,RUN A LOT))