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Hey! Thankz Rachel from threadless staff to quickly help me to fix my flash presentation.
See this art on better resolution here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/sassatattoo/4177544403/ |
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I love your illustration and I think it would stand on it's own without the joke. It's like telling everyone who sees that shirt to suck your moby dick.
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I agree that the text is terrible. Awful, really. Also, the stars feel a but disconnected (ocean is more abstract, the stars are cookie cutter). But the majority of this is awesome.
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How 'bout yar suck on my Big-Moby Monad!
...yeah, don't worry I didn't negate your score. I just figured I'd post a comment in the spirit of your design. |
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excellent illustration, I can see why you went for the text, BUT if you had the text hidden somehow it would have been better.
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HAHAHAHA dude this is a great design! The whales eye is awesome - so much expression. Good work.
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great print, and the text is funny but I could never wear it out that way. removing the text would make it perfect. $4!
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great print, and the text is funny but I could never wear it out that way. removing the text would make it perfect. $4!
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Hi friends!
Sorry again! i think remove the "suck my" from text is the best way to fix my bad joke. i really apreciatte the critics! sorry and thanks again! |
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i think this shirt would appeal to a large group of people..college kids etc..but without the text or different text, may appeal to a larger group
good work. very nice drawing. |
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this is one odd combination of literate and "high-school" humour.
The quote just seems to detract too much from the image, which is a shame considering the detail. |
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Nice one Sassa! The sound of it made the dog downstairs howl like a wolf because I had the music out and it was as loud as it goes haha :)
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yeah, drop the moby dick text. resubmit with your work and tell your collab partner to suck your moby dick when you're printed.
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I was like nice until the word "suck" popped up and then I was like "screw you". Shirts that are rude are irritating.
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About my design
Moby-Dick is a symbolic work, but also includes chapters on natural history. Major themes include obsession, religion, idealism versus pragmatism, revenge, racism, sanity, hierarchical relationships, and politics.