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I think it needs more work and color but I do like the way the grass breaks up the elephant and the general premise.
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i like the grass at the bottom but i think the elephant head needs more work and some colour would be good - maybe to highlight a special/symbolic point of the artwork
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I like the concept, but I agree it needs something more. I think if you wanted to keep the design clean and not add color, maybe play a bit with line thickness or some textures?
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