i really like the graphic style, but can't make out any detail at that size :( ..i'm sensing there's something quirky to make the quote relevant, and wish i could see it.. maybe an explanation might help..?
yeah i can't really see what's going on here..it's so tiny...i recommend next time that you don't put your main design on that shirt template since you've already got two models below it...then it can be bigger...
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