Trail of Roses
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2831 days ago
Submitted on:
Aug 26 '04
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36 comments
Average score:
2.90 from 599 votes
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hmmm....
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u should have a few flowers under his feet... like they grow wherever he steps
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i like the guy a lot, and i like the concept, but something seems off.....maybe the flowers are too tall? not sure.....but i like his shirt as well.
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yeh, what merrick said
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Very sensitive.
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brilliant
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i don't think the flowers are too tall - they were intended to be larger than normal.
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Really good - I wonder if it needs to be lower on the shirt - hard to tell on a flat image. i think its clever and well executed.
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I love this shirt. The dragonflies are a really nice touch.
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Nice but get rid of the DragonFly
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Nice concept!!
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Rad.
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no need for the big dragonfly.
but its a beautiful shirt! i'd definitely get it if printed. |
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i love this. its an absolutely wonderful concept. i would most definitely buy it.
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this rocks my socks!
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really cool. real good job. 5.
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2 thumbs up :)~
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maybe a few slightly squished flowers under his feet?
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Maybe flowers a TINY bit smaller, but great. I also agree that there should be flowers starting to sprout at his feet.
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yeah i think the flowers are a bit tall, and no dragonfly. but i'd buy it after those changes...
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take out 1 of the dragonflies...too repetitive.
otherwise 5 nice work |
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stalks too thick
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i think for the flowers, the further away they are from the guy, the taller they should be, because that would imply growth. terrific idea, great design.
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thanks for your comments so far, everyone - very helpful. although, hammond, you seem to forget that things look smaller the further they are away.
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i love the trail of flowers, agree that something should be added to imply that he's creating them by walking. i also second the suggestion that the big dragonfly can go, but maybe add in a smaller one further back along the trail. i'd like to see some different color options - not a fan of the yellow color.
i am absolutely in love with you including eyelashes. so many threadless tshirt characters are featureless. it's like the fairytale in which a girl swallows a pearl and never speaks again because as she speaks gold and rubies fall out of her mouth. beautiful and mildly tragic. |
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I love the way that you didn't leave out the details. Great job. Be proud.
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I had a bit of a fiddle with the picture last night and, yes, i probably should have got rid of the big dragonfly.
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lovely.
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Maybe instead of sprouting flowers under the feet (which may clutter the simplicity of the character) - the first 5 or so flowers could be at different heights to show rapid growth after he leaves the site. Good design though - top marks
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I'm speechless.
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one to be printed. Amazing. ***** for this design.
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I agree with merrick..
Otherwise, an awesome shirt...nice job..I'd buy it. |
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Yeah, have the flowers closest to his feet smaller, as they've had less time to grow than the others. I like it.
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Awesome shirt. Pretty flowers. The contrast of the angles on the figure's upper body to the rest of the image works very well. I imagined the flowers following him. lol. Is "Trail of Roses" a reference to something? I really am not sure what to think of the dragonflies. They help visual balance... maybe they'd work in yellow/gold, too?
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38 days later
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very meloncholy
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