It's hard to tell what it is at first.

yeah, I'ts more like a ghost at first site ... don't like it very much.

Reminds Me Of "The Ring"

i like the girl.
maybe if it was clearer and on a different color or the girl was a different color.
something like that.
id probably buy it then.

'i saw you killing aristotle, i know its all part of the plan' ?

I dont think they can print all those small dots
this is pretty terrible tho, so i wouldnt worry about that
the girl just makes it look awful, she is pretty awful looking there.
take her away and maybe add something else
cut off bodies = 0

since the background is darker than the girl, it looks inversed = ugly. Also, all those little dithers are a hard print.

take out the squares

no.

Ok, thanx for the sort of constructive criticism. I agree its not my best. I want to make a new design, but still incorporate the compass graphic somehow. To bloodsong, you've got the right lyrics :)