I think that a stylized raod (in this case it's rather the way of a plane taking off) can express the fascination of travelling in a quite understandable but not too obvious way. Besides I think this is a tee you can't just wear at the beach but also in winter :)
I hope that minimalism is not automatically bad for you but please tell me your opinions be they positive or not!
its a nice placement striper with good balanced color combination, but too simple, many ppl may admire this sensibility, but i wud want lill twist in it.. cant explain exactly but lill more.......neways good effort
Thanks four your comments! I'm always hapy to hear positive opinions but criticism is also very important for me so please don't hesitate to say what you think :)
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I hope that minimalism is not automatically bad for you but please tell me your opinions be they positive or not!