I really like this. Constructive critique? I had a little trouble figuring out what was on the right side of the heart. It's a bow, right? And maybe make the white line a bit thinner. I dunno though. 5
Without the actual cross-stitching, it may be ok. In actual cross-stitch, a design that simple would never be that large (you'd probably do something that large in applique); it makes it really boring. It may have to be large to actually register on the large/far-away format of a t-shirt; but it should be more intricate. Heart + Bow from 30' away, Heart + Bow + flowers + cupids + alligators from 3' away. That would rock.
If you actually finished off the cross-stitching, it would be horrible. Look like what power-walking middle-aged women wear with the nylon running suits as they shop for groceries. Maybe thats teh direction for the new hip, but I got plenty of time to evolve to that level of fashion.
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