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biophonc
allready got it "my" shirt - but "damn" it's just kool:p
felix_the_dude
felix_the_dude on Aug 13 '04
Yeah kinda cool.
luffysan
luffysan on Aug 13 '04
thats lain, isn't it? from serial experiments lain? looks just like her in her bear suit and everything.
biophonc
biophonc on Aug 13 '04
right i was inspired by a sculpture of lain - lain rox:)
pookums_the_fembot
pookums_the_fembot on Aug 13 '04
no text
text bad
biophonc
biophonc on Aug 13 '04
nuttin 2 say - say nuttin :D
Grafikal
Grafikal on Aug 13 '04
nice ... this is the $h*t
Ava Adore
Ava Adore on Aug 13 '04
reminds me slightly of emily strange.

nice though
temerson
temerson on Aug 14 '04
text isn't always bad! this case it isn't! it's not great, but it's not bad. it's not distracting.

I like it alot. I'd buy.
RespectToBurn
RespectToBurn on Aug 14 '04
Manga
skylla
skylla on Aug 14 '04
either loose the text or make it part of the graphic.
Then I'll buy too! (or maybe 3)
biophonc
biophonc on Aug 14 '04
well, the "stronger!" stands for the survival of the fittest, a darwinistic principle, only the strong survive. If you are weak, you have to subordinate. It's some sort of social critic. "lain" is blasting teds plushbrain, because she is stronger and ted can do nothing else than getting destructed. It's teds destiny or fate, because he is not strong enough to prevent. The "stronger!" claim strengthen this statement; or beter said: this was my intention.
erkonom
erkonom on Aug 14 '04
minus the girl and the text, the shapes around her are cool
some one who finally understands dynamic angles
tERMoBLUe
tERMoBLUe on Aug 14 '04
hey yah - cool style...extremely cute ;) ...
drown in an aquarium
drown in an aquarium on Aug 14 '04
Love Lain. But you can't really tell what she's doing to Mr. Bear. And I think you should outline the teddy bear's legs so they won't look so cubic and awkward. Just refine little things. The outlining shapes are a nice touch. <3
biophonc
biophonc on Aug 14 '04
well,. and if ya like to see, as it looks like on a shirt for real,... browse my profile and visit my site - theres a little snapshot I've taken with ma webcam;)
biophonc
biophonc on Aug 14 '04
ahm, ya, I've tryed it, but i didn't get it goodlooking - So I've decided to take the paws out.^^
<^>_<(O_o)>_<^>
<^>_<(O_o)>_<^> on Aug 14 '04
I really like it!!!
mononomo
mononomo on Aug 14 '04
taken from lain
Siph De Neon
Siph De Neon on Aug 15 '04
I do like this, but the text on 'stronger' should be drawn in, rather than typed in a straight line. I'd take out the exclaimation point too. I noticed the femiminist undertones. I also noticed that red bit that looks like menstral fluids shooting out at the viewer. Which would be a very unpleasant experience o.o
biophonc
biophonc on Aug 15 '04
@all who likes it as it it: Thanks! ^^

@Siph De Neon: first of all; I'm not a woman, so there was/is no feminist ambition or mission. I haven't thought about that point of view jet - but it is an interesting interpretation. However, I guess the "menstruation" association is kind of farfetched:)

I see that some people don't like the type itself; so I guess I'll rework it. I also thought bout using the Japanse "koime" or "gekisuru" as simple infinitv, which means nearly the same. But then noone will understand it, except people with japanese language skillz, thus it would cause a stronger manga connotation, that I don't like to effectuate^^

About the drawn style; I've tested it some days ago and used that fantastic artistic strokes in illusrator, but to me it seemed hard to read. I've also placed it to the right, and within the legs from ted - but as I said befor, I didn't get it goodlooking.


I think it would be good, if a submission could have more revisions/steps, so it would be easier to modify it, without uploading complete new contributions.
mr.musiker
mr.musiker on Aug 15 '04
Yhaaaaaaaa ,it s cool Männnn ;-)
2 days later
buhl
buhl on Aug 17 '04
loose the txt and the red/white stuff behind her (on the left) - nice work though
caitcait
caitcait on Aug 17 '04
I cant really tell that shes smashing the bears head in... and if I could I dont think I would have ever liked the shirt at all. and I was really hoping that people wouldnt post shirt designs with tv show characters on it. but of course your free to submit what you want.

I would prefer teddy bear stuffing rather then blood... but I wouldnt buy it even if it was changed, its cute and a pretty good idea. just not my style I guess
biophonc
biophonc on Aug 17 '04
@caitcait: true, I can't be everybodys darling^^ __ I like things where you/ I have to look twice. It's kind of those shirts, where people start staring at in a positiv sense (i guess). I've printed it last week on a dark-deep blue shirt and "I" think it looks good - thats why I have submited it to threadless. Sure, there are better Teez out there _ no question! Maybe you like the next one I'm currently working on^^

peace!
pfiew
pfiew on Aug 17 '04
i'd buy it and for once I think its better with text
rockout
rockout on Aug 17 '04
no, i don't like it. but it's not god awful or anything. it seems like you know what you're doing, but i just didn't like the design you did.
Denelle
Denelle on Aug 18 '04
I can see the face but what she is doing or sitting or what not is hard to make out
keoshi
keoshi on Aug 18 '04
niiiiice! :D
puRe`
puRe` on Aug 19 '04
kikkz ass ... i would buy it
porcelaindoll
porcelaindoll on Aug 19 '04
i'm not too fond of the text, but i'd still buy it. +5
biophonc
biophonc on Aug 20 '04
thanks 4 voting;)
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