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 trying to focus or trying to make decision with the point
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the dots don't seem to be perfectly straight and they aren't in line with the cue anyway.
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Either get rid of the text since it's too small, it'll seem like it's not there anyway, or enlarge it.
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uhh..not font
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no.
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very constructive herman
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I would prefer the pic in the center of the shirt. and a different color shirt.
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i agree with radical edward, plus, what does it say in the corner? its weird to have something wrapped around the front corner of a shirt. the illustration isnt bad though.
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I might lose the arrow and the text altogether. guy with the cue works on its own.
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you had me untill the arrow and text.
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Either line up the arrow or lose it. The text is unnecessary. You also might consider making his hands/the cue a bit bigger, as they look a bit odd in proportion to his face.
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