awkward
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Aug 11 '04
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this would look cool with something bright in the foreground, to compliment what you got there
(just an idea) |
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good design, but not for a shirt
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you could add a fly for added effect. :)
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more colors please :(
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see caffieneman's comment.
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no more colours, no flies, no hearts, no drips, no butterflies, no guns, no girls, no flowers, no skulls, no politics, no radios, no robots, no cheap flash tracing<-------that's what separates this from 90% of this site. Accept it....please.
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indeed
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without the text i'd give it a five.. really.
Don't know why but i like the illustration a lot. |
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drop the text . nice work
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warts or moles or leprosy or pox.
i like the illustration in and of itself. but its too ugly for a t-shirt....yuck. |
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i thought the word was a signtaure at first, instead of a description.
i would really like a signature better, the drawing is sketchy and it would feel like you doodled it. assigning a word to the drawing looks like you're trying REALLY hard to give it context when it doesn't really need any. the drawing is sufficient on its own. |
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reminds me a little of nathan jurevicius. obviously less cleaner but its obviously not meant to be clean. i dont find green to be an awkward colour, though. its more sick so it makes it not look awkward but "diseased", which i dont find to be synonymous. or maybe you're trying to draw that connection. the expression is awkward but the look is "smelly".
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hehe it looks odd :P
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Don't take it so literally. He's just a friendly young one. Perhaps best left untitled...maybe awkward isn't what he's representing, it's what he's causing.
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mmmm.. sort of a thomas campbell type thing. make the cursive thing a little better and i might spring for it.
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mutant kiko from neopets.com
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I like it. I agree, though, drop the text. Keep the colors. :D
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I double what szkat said. I would drop the text and then leave it as is. If you are getting as much reaction ass you are that means it's good. You sparked a reaction goog or bad, and that is good. That's why I'd wear it, just to hear people's comments. The only five I've given so far.
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"no more colours, no flies, no hearts, no drips, no butterflies, no guns, no girls, no flowers, no skulls, no politics, no radios, no robots, no cheap flash tracing<-------that's what separates this from 90% of this site. Accept it....please. " - fade2black, at 11:29pm on Aug 11, 2004
you've got a point there. |
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Like the classic "Illustrated Word" look.
Like if you were to put the word frozen, you'd draw icecles....that kind of thing.
I say lose the text....or give it more thoughtful text.