good concept, also love the sheer exuberance of it, but something about the execution of the design is kind of meh. I think it might have to do with the center placement, and the drawing technique ... the angle on the girl's head looks slightly deformed and the jello just doesn't really look super delicious, which I think it needs to for something like this. If that were corrected and maybe if the girl was falling at an angle, or off a diveboard, then I would really like it.
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