However, if you get a chance to rework this, might I suggest pushing the pigeon more and giving him a suit and a splatter? I think the background and the human, while providing context, could be done away with without harming the concept, as long as the evidence is there.
This is a funny concept, I just think you need to push it a tad. :)
Hahahaha those damn filthbags DEFINITELY deserve it. I've been splatted on multiple times in the past. It's a very unfortunate thing. Heck, it's even happened to me while I was out of the country...TWICE (Tokyo, Japan & Bari, Italy). Notice how I remember where this took place haha. Damned pigeons. Of course many birds do this but these things are the worst.
The perspective seems mightily off, but the look of the innocent bird holding a paper tucked under its wing is just too funny to not give a good score to. Bravo on a legitimate reversal tee.
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