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trixie stalker

About my design

by trixie stalker
If I ever feel better

Remind me to spend some good time with you

You can give me your number

When it's all over I'll let you know
knothree
knothree on Jul 28 '04
i think it would read better with 'this space', 'this place' sounds strange to me

but who the hell am i
family_matters
family_matters on Jul 28 '04
agreed.
trixie stalker
trixie stalker on Jul 28 '04
the sentence that inspired me comes from pdf documents when

pages are left blank to separate the table of contents from the

content itself, there's usually this sentence on it:

"this page intentionally left blank", so page->place



but assuming you're both native english speakers, i'd say you're right.
xeugx
xeugx on Jul 28 '04
clever idea but the bleeding/broken heart idea is overdone on this site
socialdisease89
socialdisease89 on Jul 28 '04
it might be overdone but it gets me everytime
prittieinpink
prittieinpink on Jul 28 '04
i also think that space is a better word than place. place just somehow doesnt fit... and space sounds emptier.
one8_2zeros
one8_2zeros on Jul 28 '04
yeah, go with space.



as for bleeding/broken hearts being overdone... yeah. but i like this one. it's a little different in the normal, not so different way.
kyanos
kyanos on Jul 29 '04
Love the design, maybe the "sapce comments" do have apoint but what's important? It's what people understand right? :)
rhcpbloodsugar
rhcpbloodsugar on Jul 29 '04
i like this, especially the placement of the slash, reminds me of jesus...
rockout
rockout on Jul 29 '04
I agree with the "this space" idea.



i like these types of shirts... kinda overdone, true, but they're still pretty rad



sometimes
erkonom
erkonom on Jul 29 '04
played
fIash
fIash on Jul 29 '04
oh look, hector!

drips, a slash and a heart!
trixie stalker
trixie stalker on Jul 29 '04
flash,



i wouldn't answer if i wouldn't think there is kind of a point in it, but did you see that this are not the ordinary aerosol drips, but more like a digital distortion? so where do you draw the line? colors on a t-shirt, how boring.



if its not constructive and respectful (see above, i still think thats a good rule) dont say anything next time.



all the others,

thanks for the feedback and thanks to all who like it, i agree on the space thing.
3 days later
thisisridiculous
thisisridiculous on Aug 01 '04
gonna hafta agree with flash to a certain degree. the concept of visually expressing a sort of lovelorn melancholy with an empty heart, a wound, and drips, has become pretty hackneyed. you've chosen an overpopulated genre and haven't really provided anything shockingly new. sorry.

as for the negative comment debate; if you don't want to hear bad news about your design, you've come to wrong place. if you only want to hear how great it is, how everybody totally wants one, and how you're a genius, post it on your fridge instead of this site. besides, flash isn't being mean or disrespectful, you're being a little sensitive.

IMNY
IMNY on Aug 02 '04
nope.
jimbojib03
jimbojib03 on Aug 03 '04
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Dallu
Dallu on Aug 03 '04
ratings put intentionally low as well.
RespectToBurn
RespectToBurn on Aug 04 '04
Over used imagery and the sentence doesn't read well. Should be space.
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