If I ever feel better
Remind me to spend some good time with you
You can give me your number
When it's all over I'll let you know

i think it would read better with 'this space', 'this place' sounds strange to me
but who the hell am i

agreed.

the sentence that inspired me comes from pdf documents when
pages are left blank to separate the table of contents from the
content itself, there's usually this sentence on it:
"this page intentionally left blank", so page->place

but assuming you're both native english speakers, i'd say you're right.

clever idea but the bleeding/broken heart idea is overdone on this site

it might be overdone but it gets me everytime

i also think that space is a better word than place. place just somehow doesnt fit... and space sounds emptier.

yeah, go with space.

as for bleeding/broken hearts being overdone... yeah. but i like this one. it's a little different in the normal, not so different way.

Love the design, maybe the "sapce comments" do have apoint but what's important? It's what people understand right? :)

i like this, especially the placement of the slash, reminds me of jesus...

I agree with the "this space" idea.

i like these types of shirts... kinda overdone, true, but they're still pretty rad

sometimes

played

oh look, hector!
drips, a slash and a heart!

flash,

i wouldn't answer if i wouldn't think there is kind of a point in it, but did you see that this are not the ordinary aerosol drips, but more like a digital distortion? so where do you draw the line? colors on a t-shirt, how boring.

if its not constructive and respectful (see above, i still think thats a good rule) dont say anything next time.

all the others,
thanks for the feedback and thanks to all who like it, i agree on the space thing.

gonna hafta agree with flash to a certain degree. the concept of visually expressing a sort of lovelorn melancholy with an empty heart, a wound, and drips, has become pretty hackneyed. you've chosen an overpopulated genre and haven't really provided anything shockingly new. sorry.
as for the negative comment debate; if you don't want to hear bad news about your design, you've come to wrong place. if you only want to hear how great it is, how everybody totally wants one, and how you're a genius, post it on your fridge instead of this site. besides, flash isn't being mean or disrespectful, you're being a little sensitive.

nope.

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ratings put intentionally low as well.

Over used imagery and the sentence doesn't read well. Should be space.