I JUST CALLED TO SAY I LOVE YOU
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Jul 28 '04
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I think the illustration is good but the phone booth and the type underneath really pushed me away, what if you took away the booth and just had the furry bugger holding the phone?
just a suggestion |
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or maybe just fix the font, maybe more square, less odd
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I don't think this would work without the phone booth, but thanks for the suggestion. About the font, I just used 'felt marker' to get across the message. I would be up for changed it to what-ever, or even hand written.
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love the concept, the illustration, and the pink shirt, i think you should add a white background to the illustration though. right now it gets lost in the colour of the shirt.
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nice drawing, not sure about the text
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nice illus, but maybe not on a tshirt
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beautiful drawing
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holy shit!
i didnt think those words could get any worse, but you managed to do it. its a shitty song...and now its a shitty t-shirt! |
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thanks.
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family matters> i though about adding a white backround. Maybe on my next revision.
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I love the drawing. It reminds me of an oversized alph. Sans the text, I'd buy it.
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i like it |
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lose the sharp cut off at the bottom
add white tot he back use a chuinky hadwritten font that compliments the illustration (and perhaps figure out a way to actually integrate it into the illustration, rather than having it just slapped at the bottom) |
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i liked it, but then i scrolled down further and my face scrunched up at the sight of the text and bottom outline. soften it up, remove the text. my vote.
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i dont like the placement
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Reminds me of ALF.
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the telephone booth looks weird.
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i love it the illistration and even the text... id buy one if it werent pink
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Since the poor bugger is so ugly, the sappy text works. I actually feel that ugly when making compulsive would-be romance calls to ....victims. And I love it on pink. So, yeah. But I do agree, though, maybe find a way to fix how bottom of the drawing just trails off.
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What if you put the text into a word bubble? I remember there's that distinct word bubble comics use when a character is talking on a phone. That might be cool.
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this is wicked! nice job. 5/5
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I love it. Could definitely see it worn by high school girls everywhere.
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I think in the revision, it will be on a light yellow, have a white backing, and a text bubble with a easier to read font.
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I think its cute.
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is this serious.
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If you are going to stick with any text at all I suggest using either a horror font similar to those of old 50's B-movies or using the complete opposite. A beautiful script font.
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The font is bad and the image could do with being a bit smaller and a more interesting placement.
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i really like it. i dont think anything needs to be done to it. i dont know what could be done to it to make it look better. nice work.
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Awesome illustration.
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good idea, it made me chuckle. id buy it on another color.
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Illustration is good....design looks unfinished...
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did you do the illustration yourself? I think if the lines were thicker and less "sketchy" looking it could really be great
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i really like this shirt, very cute.
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I'm wearing my iron on version of this shirt right now, on a banana yellow shirt. The text isn't so bad once it's on a shirt, but I think a dotted line text bubble would be cute. Guess we'll see.. hopefully they'll take the design, fix it up, and print it.
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43 days later
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the 1.8 was generous!
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1845 days later
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roadkill3d on Oct 05 '09 YES!
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