Burr's Adventure
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Submitted on:
Sep 01 '09
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Interesting idea. it looks like a page the from the middle of a story book.
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i think the caption enhances the image, as you say, a story starter.
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Thanks for the comments. I'm glad to see my concept is understood.
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I like the idea of using it for a story. Also the touches of yellow throughout the black & white.
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ndikol on Sep 02 '09 cool :D: D
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ginetteginette on Sep 02 '09 great stufff
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I like the picture but I think the font doesn't suit it.
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berrybunny-
I agree somewhat- it's just my quick hand lettering, but I wanted a spontaneous feel for it at the time. I probably would change it, but I don't think that's possible now. Thanks for the comment. |
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amaizing style!
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i love the artwork!..it kind of reminds me of a childrens book i had forgotten about untill i saw this..something about a king and a group of friends..one could turn into fire , one could turn into a snake, one into a hive of bees,....i can't remember the rest..but thank you for the memory.
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love the art work.. just not too crazy about the placement
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ivejustquitsmoking on Sep 07 '09 nice art!
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About my design
Whoever starts the story names all the characters and continues the story as they wish.
I have named the hero character "Burr", but considering the pose, the child could be a boy or girl.
I must be from the old school of illustrators- Rackham, N.C. Wyeth, Tenniel, Shepard- when they illustrated scenes from books, there was usually a caption. It's easily removed.
And again, I wanted this to be more than a shirt. I can envision an adult seeing it and engaging the child in making up a story about it together.