There's something about Ronald's expression+stance that doesn't fit into the whole picture. I think he'd be better if he's leaning on the counter, toward the KFC guy, and looking a bit more threatening. KFC guy, on the other hand, is awesome!
yeah ronald looks to laid back with his hand in his pocket. i think he needs the hand on the table and sort of leaning across. maybe grabbing the kfc's collar or something. also probably lose the text.
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