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The Story And Its Teller

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Aug 27 '09
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Austin Fizzle

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by Austin Fizzle
the writer scribbling his story as it plays out right in front of him



ENJOY :D
Maltzmania
Maltzmania on Aug 27 '09
very cool
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 28 '09
I both really enjoy the thick linework of this design because it really makes the idea stand out more and wish it was a little thinner for added detail to the concept. Love the concept, biblical yet not overly-preachy.
mgill52
mgill52 on Aug 28 '09
cool idea
manapapa
manapapa on Aug 28 '09
very nice
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Aug 28 '09
sweet!
Muckl
Muckl on Aug 28 '09
Very appealing!
Austin Fizzle
Austin Fizzle on Aug 28 '09
It's actually not supposed to be biblical :) but I'm glad that this leaves a little to the imagination
Austin Fizzle
Austin Fizzle on Aug 29 '09
it's supposed to be on the front btw
8bitcat
8bitcat on Aug 29 '09
The lineart seems a tad sloppy, I'd like to see it refined some more. Cool idea though, and I like how simple and straightforward it is.
maariaa
maariaa on Aug 29 '09
Cool!
cyanidee
cyanidee on Aug 30 '09
i don't like thick jagged line work but otherwise nice
guy_mandude
guy_mandude on Aug 30 '09
Maybe if you made the clouds more airy, no lines, dotted ink and added some froth and shading (if that doesn't disrupt the printing scheme) to the water.



Also maybe if you made the lines like... thick pencil lines, medium pressure. Thick but still transparent.
paintsplatteredoctupus
paintsplatteredoctupus on Aug 30 '09
i like the concept
Austin Fizzle
Austin Fizzle on Aug 31 '09
like some of those ideas guys. if this doesn't do well enough i'll try em and put it up for a critique



:D
annihill
annihill on Sep 02 '09
this reminds me alot of the marvelous misadventures of flapjack, so it gets $5 :3
malcolmeb
malcolmeb on Sep 02 '09
i like the line quality
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