A squirrel's soliloquy
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Aug 25 '09
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Nice poem
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cuuuuute
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I like the poem, but I think your design is much more effective without the text.
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Pakpandir on Aug 25 '09 poem is great! but i agree with the previous.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 26 '09 Put the poem on the bottom back of the shirt, and you've got yourself a print there.
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I agree with FA. Great idea but put the scroll on the back and you're onto a winner.
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Great illustration... it can do very well on it's own, no need for the poem (which is nice, but over explanatory)
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great illo, i like it a lot.. you should loose that scroll and keep it simple. That's my humble oppinion of course!
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:)
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I love everything about this shirt. Text, scroll, placement, everything! But I would be okay with the scroll being on the back too. :) Very nice poem.
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not sure about the poem being on the front of the shirt, but it's beautifully worded and gave my goosebumps :)
love the simplicity. 4 |
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Squirrel a tad to the left, Scroll to the right.
So it looks like the squirrel's reading it. Once its there, 5 and buy. |
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the illustration of the squirrel on the stump looking at the tree could be a print in its own right, with the poem on the sleeve/back
that would be awesome |
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nice!
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How can you not say "Awww!"? Everyone else gave great suggestions about placement, I think any of them would work. Too cute!
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lawrence loh on Aug 30 '09 nice work!
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I LOVE IT. Though, I, too, think the poem should be on the back. Not the back bottom, the whole back. Or else the illustration should be on the "scroll" As is, the two parts are not visually linked, and don't work well together
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Very interesting, 5!
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beautiful poam and nice style tho it could be a problem enjoying from it on a T shirt. |
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8D
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351 days later
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Wow - love it!
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