Party Foul! $5 Penalty! Just an idea I had for along time ago, just kinda' like it slip into my wormhole of laziness... Then I decided to do it! The Urban Dictionary describes a party foul as something you shouldn't do at any social gathering. This guy's got two fould under his belt: Spilling beer, and drunk dancing on the table. Barefoot. Make that three. I hope you enjoy! Thanks, all!

I don't know anything about party fouls, but that guy has some sweet moves

cool!

there are a lot of individuals here that aren't really needed for the story to work. they sort of just create more confusion. a faceless crowd would have been better (like people all in one bunch) then scattered individuals. composition hurts from it too.

I agree with ginettex2, there is a really funny idea and drawing waiting to burst out of this cluttered composition. Reduce the number of people on both the sides and especially in front of the dancing table man and you've got yourself a really hilarious design! Maybe a whistle being blown in the ref's mouth as well?

Hey, Ginette, remember when you told me that you shouldn't critique or post links on other peoples' subs, because it's all about their sub getting boosted and praised? Good times.

this is not a circle jerk. this place isn't just about designs getting praise. it is about the submission so, yes, stealing the spotlight with links is a jerk thing to do but my comment was about the design.

people are allowed to say what they like or dislike about your design.

haha i love that i know who the people are and who they represent :) total party at our school!

@ Ginette: Okay, Ginette. I didn't ask you about all that. All I said is what YOU said in summation. Wasn't lookin' for a fight, lol. In fact, I agree with you, people CAN say what they want on my sub, it's the internet. Just noticing how your ideals aren't parallel.



vballashells: Lol! Yeah, I don't know who would let that happen, vballa... too many RAs! But I guess these people are older, ain't they?

Lol awesome 5 !!

Like it good job



if you have time

my submission

haha ... funny

funny!

Hey all



I think its kinda funny how people to see a design in different stages. Some in the critique, others when it has been subbed and approved.



I have been following this one since the 1st version so IMO, it wouldn't work if there were less people in the design itself. If anything, more people! Man, there is a guy dancing on the table with no shoes on! If that doesn't bring in a crowd then all hope is lost!! Hehe!!



Since i'm a total noob at all this, in my own experience posting critique in a sub is kinda funny to me. This is my own personal opinion on this but please feel free to let me know what you people think.



As stated above, been following this one for some time and love it! Party on hard - but without the foul!!



Woohooooo!

I think it's great!

Hey it's finally up! Great work! 5!

Oh dear... people, please stop talking about this... I REALLY don't want EVERY sub I post to be plagued with argument. I wasn't DISSING Ginette, and I NEVER SAID HER INPUT WASN'T GOOD. I just noticed that she said one thing, and did another, when she made a big deal about it, and tried DISSING ME on my sub earlier. It was a neutralizing point, not a defensive attack (if that even makes sense). I'm not attacking anybody, peeps. Just vote and stay on topic...



Ginette: I'm not trying to "DISS" you, and if I offended you, I apologize. I'm not one to hold a grudge.



I'm not trying to hold on to this, I'm not all hissy about it, and I sure don't really care. Just let it go, people. I'm just here to sub. Aight? Aight.

Ugh... INTERNET FOUL...

i dunno how you can basically call someone a hypocrite without dissing them, and to be frank, i'm really confused as to what you're referring to when you say that my ideals aren't parallel when the only thing i've ever said to you was to not post links because it's not accepted here, which was like two months ago and not a big deal.



as for the comments being derailed you sort of brought it upon yourself but this is the last comment i'll make here.

heh, nice concept here!

well, i really like it!

Great work!

Hey, you finally subbed! Nice work! It's great to see how much it's evolved.

cool cool! nice illustration, and fun concept.

Haha hilarious

More emphasis on the spilled drink. But I like it.

Awww... You already know I love this :)

Haha! Thanks, man... I love it, too...

yay for dancing on tables n_n

I like it, $5

cool style!

LAST DAY!

Good stuff. My critique is similar to Ginette's (and I have made no claims about criticism.)



So awesome design, clutter isnt necessarily bad, but to draw the eye to the focal point (the party foul and ref) You might want to put the other party goers in muted color or darker, make the outlines thicker for the two guys, add less detail to everyone else or create some flash of another color right behind him.

Good luck

Thanks!

I SEE YOU!



i like this design. if anything maybe draw more definable lines on the faces/have a background that doesn't take away from the presentation of your design.



otherwise, pretty nicee :)