I wonder if this was zeuz's horse...great job!!! Would you do me a favor and tell me what you think about a design I've submitted for a critique, just go to my profile and click on my critiques and you'll see it...appreciated. And once again...good job my friend!!!
I like it. I think it would be better on either brown or navy though. I think that would contrast the blue and yellow better. If you have the time, could you grade my WIP?
the design is great, i think it would look even better if you changed the colors, i personally don't think the blue goes together well with the rest of it
Thanks for checking out my critique man!!! Anyways I really hope this gets printed my friend!!! And I'm going to ask you another favor, would you mind checking out my first submission (which is obviously the one you critiqued) and tell me if you can see it, because when I click on it only the three lines at the bottom are visible...don't know if this has anything to do with the fact that it is still getting approved. Thanks, and I'm going to try to show this design to people so they help you with your score.
Yes. Takes me back to the Heavy Metal days. The movie not the music genre.
It's your one way ticket to midnight
Call it heavy metal
Higher than high, feelin' just right
Call it heavy metal
Desperation on a red line
Call it heavy metal noise
Love this. Always been a fan of the unicorn. This one is much more mature than any of the ones I sported in the 80's. No glitter, no purple. Very nice.
Sorry if this bothers you, but would you mind checking out my new critique (it's actually the same one, but this one shows the placement), sadly I had to delete my last critique since I finally came up with a good title and it didn't let me change it. Thanks!!!
MaxPf
Some simple, three-color unicornishness. With lightning bolts!
lawrence loh
cool!
Jayk94
this is hell funny but awsome
MaxPf
Thanks for the compliments! :)
Morrito
I wonder if this was zeuz's horse...great job!!! Would you do me a favor and tell me what you think about a design I've submitted for a critique, just go to my profile and click on my critiques and you'll see it...appreciated. And once again...good job my friend!!!
DNAmorris
I love the style, and the minimalist presentation. I hate large over elaborate designs on my shirts. Id buy this for sure. 5$Ftlong
Spam69
It's hard to tire of Unicorn designs - 3 -
truebenson
I like it. I think it would be better on either brown or navy though. I think that would contrast the blue and yellow better. If you have the time, could you grade my WIP?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/50342/Melting_Crayons
Thanks a bazillion.
ndikol
cute :D
TheloniusMnk
I don't like the horn part. The perspective is off. Otherwise nice and clean. Well done.
Admiral Pants
Yay!
divaM17
i like how the horn is striped flat and agree it'd be good on navy!
MaxPf
Yah, brown or navy could definitely work. I should have shown alternate colors...oh well. Great idea, thanks!
gabeferreira
the design is great, i think it would look even better if you changed the colors, i personally don't think the blue goes together well with the rest of it
Morrito
Thanks for checking out my critique man!!! Anyways I really hope this gets printed my friend!!! And I'm going to ask you another favor, would you mind checking out my first submission (which is obviously the one you critiqued) and tell me if you can see it, because when I click on it only the three lines at the bottom are visible...don't know if this has anything to do with the fact that it is still getting approved. Thanks, and I'm going to try to show this design to people so they help you with your score.
Pakpandir
Nah this is not's zeus' horse. This is Thor's mighty steed! i dig this alot.
Wild Morrito
Haha nice
Ricki Jane
I really like the style and colours! Good job!
amyflanagan
Niiiiiiiiiiice.
jktskrg
ow...simple n eye catchy...
Dexter Spandex
stylish
MaxPf
Thanks everybody. It's Thor's horse, for sure!
captainstaple
I think it would be better off to the left and further down and much bigger.
Designs in the middle aren't so hot anymore.
MaxPf
Hmm...yah maybe...I'll have to play around with that, thanks!
ChevyMetal
Yes. Takes me back to the Heavy Metal days. The movie not the music genre.
It's your one way ticket to midnight
Call it heavy metal
Higher than high, feelin' just right
Call it heavy metal
Desperation on a red line
Call it heavy metal noise
loki629
that's awesome, reminds me of the flash and pegasus all at once. love the simplicity
melrosey
Love this. Always been a fan of the unicorn. This one is much more mature than any of the ones I sported in the 80's. No glitter, no purple. Very nice.
Ian-S
Great perspective. Very cool!
Ronlewhorn
Could be sweet to have him bursting through some stylized clouds. Really swirly and illustrated in the style of the unicorn. Sweet style.
SEVEN-HUNDRED
Nice - needs a bit more stuff goin on tho
TeacupBee
Oooo, lightning Unicorn! I'd like to see this HUGE on the shirt.
MaxPf
Bigger w/clouds! Great ideas, thanks!
zenab11
wht a horse
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kingslip
good stuff
Admiral Pants
TheloniusMnk on Aug 09 '09
I don't like the horn part. The perspective is off. Otherwise nice and clean. Well done.
I don't think mythical creatures can be out of perspective...
MaxPf
Haha! Good point, Admiral.
John Will Balsley
That's really cool, great design and style, 5!
Morrito
Sorry if this bothers you, but would you mind checking out my new critique (it's actually the same one, but this one shows the placement), sadly I had to delete my last critique since I finally came up with a good title and it didn't let me change it. Thanks!!!
xSBxcKcxSBx
Haha thats crazyy. Unicorns are badass. I'd buy!
chhh
for all ya unicorn lovers this is awsome!
megjen
I like the design, make it bigger and you're good to go, 5 :)
MaxPf
Yeah I think bigger would be good. OK!
Tripa seca
it deserved cause its very cool
MaxPf
Thanks everybody for the great comments and scoring! Much appreciated.
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