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Ride the Lightning

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Submitted on:
Aug 08 '09
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2.34 from 703 votes
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MaxPf

About my design

by MaxPf
Some simple, three-color unicornishness. With lightning bolts!
lawrence loh
   lawrence loh on Aug 08 '09
cool!
Jayk94
Jayk94 on Aug 08 '09
this is hell funny but awsome
MaxPf
MaxPf on Aug 08 '09
Thanks for the compliments! :)
Morrito
Morrito on Aug 08 '09
I wonder if this was zeuz's horse...great job!!! Would you do me a favor and tell me what you think about a design I've submitted for a critique, just go to my profile and click on my critiques and you'll see it...appreciated. And once again...good job my friend!!!
DNAmorris
DNAmorris on Aug 08 '09
I love the style, and the minimalist presentation. I hate large over elaborate designs on my shirts. Id buy this for sure. 5$Ftlong
Spam69
Spam69 on Aug 08 '09
It's hard to tire of Unicorn designs - 3 -
truebenson
truebenson on Aug 08 '09
I like it. I think it would be better on either brown or navy though. I think that would contrast the blue and yellow better. If you have the time, could you grade my WIP?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/50342/Melting_Crayons



Thanks a bazillion.

ndikol
   ndikol on Aug 09 '09
cute :D
TheloniusMnk
TheloniusMnk on Aug 09 '09
I don't like the horn part. The perspective is off. Otherwise nice and clean. Well done.
Admiral Pants
Admiral Pants on Aug 09 '09
Yay!
divaM17
divaM17 on Aug 09 '09
i like how the horn is striped flat and agree it'd be good on navy!
MaxPf
MaxPf on Aug 09 '09
Yah, brown or navy could definitely work. I should have shown alternate colors...oh well. Great idea, thanks!
gabeferreira
gabeferreira on Aug 09 '09
the design is great, i think it would look even better if you changed the colors, i personally don't think the blue goes together well with the rest of it
Morrito
Morrito on Aug 09 '09
Thanks for checking out my critique man!!! Anyways I really hope this gets printed my friend!!! And I'm going to ask you another favor, would you mind checking out my first submission (which is obviously the one you critiqued) and tell me if you can see it, because when I click on it only the three lines at the bottom are visible...don't know if this has anything to do with the fact that it is still getting approved. Thanks, and I'm going to try to show this design to people so they help you with your score.
Pakpandir
   Pakpandir on Aug 09 '09
Nah this is not's zeus' horse. This is Thor's mighty steed! i dig this alot.
Wild Morrito
Wild Morrito on Aug 09 '09
Haha nice
Ricki Jane
Ricki Jane on Aug 09 '09
I really like the style and colours! Good job!
amyflanagan
amyflanagan on Aug 09 '09
Niiiiiiiiiiice.
Dexter Spandex
Dexter Spandex on Aug 10 '09
stylish
MaxPf
MaxPf on Aug 10 '09
Thanks everybody. It's Thor's horse, for sure!
captainstaple
captainstaple on Aug 10 '09
I think it would be better off to the left and further down and much bigger.

Designs in the middle aren't so hot anymore.
MaxPf
MaxPf on Aug 10 '09
Hmm...yah maybe...I'll have to play around with that, thanks!
ChevyMetal
ChevyMetal on Aug 10 '09
Yes. Takes me back to the Heavy Metal days. The movie not the music genre.



It's your one way ticket to midnight

Call it heavy metal

Higher than high, feelin' just right

Call it heavy metal

Desperation on a red line

Call it heavy metal noise

loki629
loki629 on Aug 10 '09
that's awesome, reminds me of the flash and pegasus all at once. love the simplicity
melrosey
melrosey on Aug 10 '09
Love this. Always been a fan of the unicorn. This one is much more mature than any of the ones I sported in the 80's. No glitter, no purple. Very nice.
Ian-S
   Ian-S on Aug 10 '09
Great perspective. Very cool!
Ronlewhorn
Ronlewhorn on Aug 10 '09
Could be sweet to have him bursting through some stylized clouds. Really swirly and illustrated in the style of the unicorn. Sweet style.
SEVEN-HUNDRED
SEVEN-HUNDRED on Aug 10 '09
Nice - needs a bit more stuff goin on tho
TeacupBee
TeacupBee on Aug 10 '09
Oooo, lightning Unicorn! I'd like to see this HUGE on the shirt.
MaxPf
MaxPf on Aug 10 '09
Bigger w/clouds! Great ideas, thanks!
zenab11
zenab11 on Aug 10 '09
wht a horse







Just have a look on my website its all about green !!!

u can find some admiration.



green journal - environment directory
kingslip
kingslip on Aug 11 '09
good stuff
Admiral Pants
Admiral Pants on Aug 11 '09
TheloniusMnk on Aug 09 '09

I don't like the horn part. The perspective is off. Otherwise nice and clean. Well done.



I don't think mythical creatures can be out of perspective...
MaxPf
MaxPf on Aug 11 '09
Haha! Good point, Admiral.
John Will Balsley
John Will Balsley on Aug 11 '09
That's really cool, great design and style, 5!
Morrito
Morrito on Aug 11 '09
Sorry if this bothers you, but would you mind checking out my new critique (it's actually the same one, but this one shows the placement), sadly I had to delete my last critique since I finally came up with a good title and it didn't let me change it. Thanks!!!
xSBxcKcxSBx
xSBxcKcxSBx on Aug 12 '09
Haha thats crazyy. Unicorns are badass. I'd buy!
chhh
chhh on Aug 12 '09
for all ya unicorn lovers this is awsome!
megjen
megjen on Aug 13 '09
I like the design, make it bigger and you're good to go, 5 :)
MaxPf
MaxPf on Aug 14 '09
Yeah I think bigger would be good. OK!
Tripa seca
Tripa seca on Aug 14 '09
it deserved cause its very cool
MaxPf
MaxPf on Aug 16 '09
Thanks everybody for the great comments and scoring! Much appreciated.
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