Clementine Ninjas

by yellowbouncyball

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Aug 04 '09

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2.21 from 723 votes

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by yellowbouncyball

The Clementine Ninjas, Guarders of the yummy Clementine tree. I love ninjas and I thought this would be a fun concept for a shirt. I know I would love to wear this! Thanks for taking the time to vote!

Sparky the Wonderboy on Aug 04 '09

It's cute, very well-done, and everyone loves ninjas (except pirates, unicorns and mimes, of course). And their stubby limbs are sooo kawaii!

But...if you made them round and textured like clementines, I'd get the joke, otherwise without the title and explanation, I don't. Also, I don't think the black shadow background is necessary.

PoiZnVirus on Aug 04 '09

I love ninjas so 4/5

check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50121/Follow_The_Line

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50120/B_amp_W

incredibleblahs on Aug 04 '09

i agree with sparky. a little more texture and rotundness to the ninjas would be more effective. and i can do without the shadowing.

urbffjill on Aug 04 '09

that is so cute!

FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 04 '09

I'm giving you high points just for combinging the words clementine and ninja.

yellowbouncyball on Aug 04 '09

The ninjas arent supposed to literally be Clementines- The idea is that Orange is a fruit- and a color... and Clementines are Small Oranges- So I called these guys clementine Ninjas. I added the tree in just for fun and thought it would be cute to add a few ninjas hanging out in the tree- but there is no joke to literally be clementines :)

As for the background -I tried it without it and it felt un-balanced to me- but I would be happy with or without that.

Thanks for the comments and the votes! :) I appreciate the criticism! :)

yellowbouncyball on Aug 04 '09

EDIT: Clementines are Small Oranges- So I called these guys clementine Ninjas BECAUSE THE ARE SMALL NINJAS.

man I really need to proof read my stuff before submitting :)

animabase on Aug 05 '09

Wow. very cute~

Tigerbill on Aug 05 '09

Nice to see this up for voting. You did well with it.

sausage_moe on Aug 05 '09

Nice design. i want the blue shirt to be printed. i was going to score 4$ but you get a HUGE extra point for that wonderful presentation of yours. took me some time to discover the "HiYa"!

Care to critique my "How it really happened"?